This is very well written and your characterization is spot on.

I really hope you update soon.

Oh do continue with this! It's great!

Simply wonderful! I am so intrigued and desperate to know more. I really like this Obi-Wan - too many times fans paint him in poor light, you make him human. Again, your writing just flows...

Oh man woot! You are way amazing, but I already said that. You have such knowledge of Star Wars! Perfect and not overannoying detail, I what I mean is I like details and everything, but too much gets way boring, I think you did a perfect job right in between.

I'm fairly curious where your going to go with this story later, so many possibilities, I'm going to say no matter what you choose to do will probably suprise me, it just seems like something you would be able to do.

Jeez, it is hard to think that this never happened in the movies, but in another view you have your own twist on it.

I better quite writing now I'm kind of not making sense and making grammar errors. And using a couple of words too often and way close together.

Word... yeah.

This is so good! Oh my goodness you are such a great writer! You have captured Obi-Wan perfectly, not many authors can brag about that, so excellent job! Please continue with this. You have great talent! I look forward to your next chapter!

MTFBWY

K.Elessar

wonderful chapter update soon!

Jade

This is amazing... I love this story... Beautiful!

Wow. I love the depth of character you've given Obi-Wan, and I especially love how you kind of...fill in the blanks, if that made sense. Really love this story. Can't wait for more

You've got me hooked. Great job!

Your writing style is wonderfully flawless. Please, I must see some more! You are an awesome writer!

*wails*

Ah, Padme...Anakin! no! *reaches for tissues*

*sniffles* Great fic...terribly sad. Very good job with the darker aspects.

Beautifully written and the detail adds so much. It just feels so real, nothing about the emotions seem faked or flawed. Nice work!

wonderful chapter! the next one is going to be so sad! update soon!

Jade

Wow. What can I say? It was beautiful, and sad, and utterly magical. Loved it.

Great chapter! I'm really liking this story. Keep up the good work!