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| Rose1948 2008-07-17 ch 26,  | abuseJust finished Chapters 25 & 26. This is fantastic, hon. It's just holding and holding on to me. When this story does come to its conclusion, I can honestly say that it will be hard to let it go. ::chuckles:: |
| ExtinctionsEnd 2008-07-13 ch 26, | abuseThis is the best fanfiction I've read to date, very involved plot and just the right amount of humor. Excellent work. :) |
| Sdarian 2008-07-11 ch 26, | abuseI was wondering how Shinji would be able to fight back. I'm wonder what would happen if he didn't just absorb Adam (and maybe Lilith as well after using Adam's power to turn all everyone in that world) before he went back to his own world. Considering that Lilith was kicking his ** with just hers and Adam's on Grey's homeworld, if he came back with a pair of them and fought her... Well that would be a far better fight. But this is a neat idea, having her being attacked from within and without. Keep up the good work! |
| Blood Of Odin 2008-07-10 ch 11, | abuseI about died laughing on the omake for the sentei unverse. i had forgotten how bad that show was! butyeah, Innortal proves again why he is one ofmy fae authors not just on this site. his writting is clean, funny, and done without plotholes. |
| ExtinctionsEnd 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseVery well written,funny as well. Only a few typos like this one:Then it hit her. “Wait s second. You’re planning on using Unit 01!” |
| Martrex 2008-07-07 ch 26, | abuseWowza! I feared that the story had died a horrible and unusually quiet death! Great chapter! although I would have thought that ,even KNOWING that Yui wasn't HIS Yui, he would have reacted more... but mebbir not. Can't wait for more!! |
| Steven 2008-07-06 ch 26, anon. | abuseThis has to be my fave story here. I was very happy to see it was finally updated. I hope it won't take this long for the next chapter to be posted tho. :) ps: I would like to see more time in the next chapter in uni b with Shinji, but since you are th one writing this it is really up to you. |
| Dragon Man 180 2008-07-06 ch 26, | abuseInteresting, I can't wait to see how the gathering of the other minds Lilith absorbed goes! |
| dennisud 2008-07-06 ch 26, | abuseI can say with this one your approaching the level od Axel Terazaki, Radom 1377 Rommel, and others in writing Classic Eva fanfiction! Kudos and salutations! Now please GET WIT DA WRITIN! dennisud! |
| Alucard180 2008-07-06 ch 26, | abusewow that was a good chapter, there nothing bad to say, and im looking forward to more of the same update soon |
| Cooltony101neo 2008-07-06 ch 26, | abuseWell you had some spelling mistakes but not a lot |
| Neferius 2008-07-06 ch 26, | abuseJeez Innortal, I was wondering if you'd get around to updating this. Though I'm not one to talk since I never update. Actually I was quite glad to see the next chapter pop up. I like how this other universe is handling the grey seed. What can he do for their future? I can't wait to see who Rei revives next as well as Kaworu's call to Mayumi. Good work. Read ya Later. |
| NamelessHeretic 2008-07-06 ch 26, | abuseAnd so this false climax is merely a second exposition... this is going to be a very long story. :D |
| firelordeg 2008-07-06 ch 26, | abusewow i had thout this abanden thank you for the fantastic update please update again a.s.a.l.a. |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2008-07-05 ch 26, | abuseA chapter worthy of the wait. Though, to be honest, I enjoy seeing Shinji's effect on Universe B more than the goings-on in Universe A. :) |