Oh fuck no! C'mon, one last chapter is all we need! WHY ISN'T THIS FINISHED!

*cries*

Well im going to stick with this, it looks good and the idea is fun.

On the other hand - you are really really heavy on the the pro christian feel, and that offends me a little. I havent decided if that's just how you characterise shinji for this fic, but if it is then thats fine, as long as its his character. If it turns out to be a overarching theme of the fic i may just haemorrhage blood from my face and stop reading.

At the moment its comming on a little strong and some excerpts from chapter one even had my housemate respond with;

RELIGION IS LIKE A PENIS.

It's fine to have one. It's fine to be proud of it. But please don't whip it out in public and start waving it around.

still, see you in a few chapters when ive decided if i want to keep reading

ja ne

Excellent story. I greatly enjoyed reading it.

Such an awesome story.

Too bad it looks dead.

"OJ has returned."

I damn near died laughing when I read that.

please complete

Henflick Limit? Did you mean Hayflick Limit? A cell can ony divide a finite number of times before becoming senescent. The only types of cells to escape this limitation are stem cells and neoplastic tumor cells.

Spanish: buena historia lastima que no es un SxA :P pero igual disfrute leerla

salu2

Great story, but are you even going to finish it? It has been a really long time since the last update. So say something about the future of this story so I know if it will be finished or if I should just forget it was ever written.

This story is so close to completion... It's so interesting... So please finish it! From what I've been reading it will be done in one or two chapters with maybe an epilogue! It's an absolute shame that you seem to have dropped it! Please finish this story up! I spent all day reading it and I really want to read the end!

I have to admite to not reading many Evangelion stories, something i may look in to fixing after this one. However as I've found most of the stories you have out to be awesome works. (Can't say off of them are as i've not read all of them, something else i'm looking into fixing). I hope you update this story soon as i look forward to seeing what will come next for it.

the idea of more than one eva in the sea of derack whould make a great base for a whole fic

an interesting chapter, regardless of the plot twist. it seems less capturin of the stories excitement, however. this chapter is more like a important stuff but also sorta like an unnecessary stalling. the plot twists amazed me throughout the story and captured my attention totally, so i like tis story a lot. but at this point, its like you need to get to the big ending of the story, maybe some philosphical questions.. anyways, tis chapter was sorta a bummer, and not just because it wasn't as good as any other kinda felt a little boring for this one, though i can't really identify the feeling.

but, congratulation on the 25 chapters of greatness! i really wish you'd finish this story, bcuz every chapter is good, this chapter 26 structre is just a little lacking..

Wow. 7 reviews. That's, like, triple-lucky. This must be one of the luckiest stories out there.

It's so close to being finished! Still, more than a year with no updates...

You're quite evil, you know that?