umm.. u do know that the spirit inside the EVA is (unit 01) is the main character's mother rite?

on a different note, i saw ur omake #1, and did u get it from the story "Twin Leaves of Uzumaki", cuz the mallete is also in there...

very funny, i like your style

Finally a new good Eva fic. You out did all of my expectations that I had from the summary. Simply: I love it. It has everything that's cool in a Eva AU fic. This is a great story, and it is written very well. And to top it off, your Omakes are the funniest ones I've ever seen.

I can't wait to see more of this in the futures, I'll be waiting for it!

great chapter and i am looking forward to the next one. the grammer was excellant and the idea and plotline for the sotry is very original. keep up the good work and update soon.

I like your story.

Its a good start and i look forward to read more.

And the omakes are great.

Keep it up.

Perfect begining. Sounds like a perfect story. A soon to be masterpiece. But I have one question. Will you finish what you started. Or give up like so many others? Please don't give up. This story has so much potential. I think it will be a great story. update, update, update.

Another great fic in the making. Even though it's not a Ranma 1/2 I enjoyed this first chapter immensely. Although your Ranma-ness shows in the omakes.

Here's one I've been kicking around forever now:

OMAKE

Rei running to school late with a slice of toast hanging out her mouth.

Rei: Ah man, I'm gonna be late.

She gets hit by a semi-truck while crossing the street.

Later,

Fuyutsuke: Oops, looks like we need another rei!

Gendo: We lose more Rei's that way.

I like the new Shinji, he's alot cooler than the original. I can't wait to see some of his attacks. I hope Gendo gets stepped on by one of the EVA, the pompous ass would deserve it.

overall good story. Those omakes were very funny.

One of the Few 'Shinji's goit a backbone" stories that IMHO is realistic and can supercede the original plot well.

I kinda hope Rei feels a kindredship early and becomes more boinded to him than the Commander. Oh and I like the fact that he's from Adam and She's from Lillith. Too bad Asuka could have been from "Eve" but that's another idea for later.

dennisud2015

Just so you know, the term 'Angels' isn't actually a 100% accurate translation of what Gainax originally called the monsters in Evangelion. The meaning that we associate 'Angels' with in English isn't exactly what was meant in the Japanese version. In Japanese, they were called "shito" instead of "tenshi" which is the word for what we think of as an angel. It might throw a few wrenches into what you have envisioned for this story, but I figure it's probably better for you to know sooner rather than later.