This is very good.

It is a bit...Eccentric I guess I would say. I personally would love to see Snape drunk and being really...crazy and wild, like a stupid teenager. He could be dilutional and see James or something and talk to his ghost or just mid air or something. Sorry if you don't like the idea. Just a suggestion. I have commented on your fanfics a lot lately, and once again i will say 'I am a critic.' Well...I still like baby Harry best! Keep it up.

aw that was so sad but good

A very sad, but really great one-shot{:) I love it:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)

Bye for now:)

IT WAS SO SAD! but it was good

it was cute

ok i admit it was a little rocky in the beginning but i loved it... it was so heartfelt and btw thank u for updating ur babies can teach lots of lessons stories its one of my favorites

Okay, it is decent, but you need a beta who is a native speaker of English for it to be more readable.

here: " She was thirteen and as they told me, she was not imposed to any magic." I would change "imposed" to "exposed". Your use of "impose" in the next sentence is fine.

Here: "Are you intensively disgusted by my cowardness?" I would use "cowardice"

Overall, I don't feel totally convinced by the characterization and dialogue, BUT, considering this is not your first language, it is quite well-written.

Keep writing!

Dude, it's good. Trust me on this. It's good.

believeable

wow...ive always thought of snape as this cold lifeless machine. even after the first book where he saves harry and...all the other times he saves people. Ive only kinda seen him as a deatheater. i kinda thought he just went with the flow and spied, tortured and killed. he could be all those things i just said but i think ure story hits closer to home than mine. thnx anyways u opened my eyes

This is really good! Are you going to continue? cos I think you should! :D

I really believe he could feel that way, and Dumbledore should hear it more often.

Wonderful! Too bad there is not more.

This was as unbeleivably perfect as the normally clouded human perseption allows. You, however, seem to have been gifted with the ability to read my mind and spread out in an amazing one-shot the almost exact unseen side I have of Snape that I'm very upset is not displayed as much as it should be. It's a rare occurance and you've done it fantastically. Some people try and completely slaughter it. Yours is something that is definatly going on my favorites list. I love it!