Aww! I just love all the fluff and tenderness. It always gets to me. I hope you continue this, it's really good.

Kant wait for the rest of this good story! Update soon please! ;D

OMG i really want you to update i mean update right now i would personally kill the old lady i mean how rude is she to do that? squall and rinny can do anything they want its a free country right? is there gonna be a lil lemon in this fanfic? sorry i know im a lemon squinoa person *squints eyes* dont hit me so please update im dying for you to update *gives you cookie* there is this gonna make you update?

Much luck in writing,

Angel Wing Rinoa7

P.S. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

o continue i cant wait . good so far god that lady was annoying i would've done the same thing as rinoa sheesh well continue please .

much luck in writing,

Ashley

Squall and Rinoa should seriously engage the old lady-I'm telling you!

(*aims pinwheel*)

Anyways, like I said before: UPDATE!

And give us some "graphic" details... you know: a little more on Squall and Rinoa's love life, lolzz

I can't wait till you update!

Yeah, I read this (way back when) and never got around reviewing, so now: here's my review _

Okay, it's a good story so far, but please update! Write! WE all wanna read more!

And for the "old lady":

Squall owns a gunblade, right? Now, all he has to really do is move (just a little) and behead her! (*cackles*)

That's the only thing I disagreed with: keeping the old lady alive. I mean: WHO THE HELL is she to tell Squall and Rinoa what's right? In my opinion, the reason that prune bag is pushing Squall around is because she (like everyone else in the world) wants a taste of Squall, and is JEALOUS of Rinoa.

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WEll, I'm gonna read chapter two!

Keep up the good work, write often, and remember: KILL THOSE PERVERTED OLD PEOPLE, lol.

Now, as I read from the first chapter you asked for no flames-Please do not take my words as a flame.

You're characters are Rinoa and Squall-correct? Well they don't act like the original characters. About the only thing that seems normal are the names. You need to put them into character.

Your details are descriptive but you don't need to make the entire first chapter revolve around how great Rinoa's skin is.

Again, this isn't a flame-its constructive criticism. Apologies if I've offended you.

SaddestLullaby...

This was a good start. I quite liked it. Well done and keep it up. Thanks for reviewing my fic No Matter What. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Rinny Leonheart

haha..the hell was that squall? pinching rinoas ass in a public place..hahahaha..anyway, hope to read the next chapter soon

That was beautiful..And weird at the same time.Thia was an awesome fic.its giveing me somthing to keep me occupied while a certain somebody tries to update My Girl! Both of you..PLEASE UPDATE!

hehe this story is very cute. Can't wait for the next chapter.

stupid old lady! she should mind her own business. LOL! keep it up! update soon!

Hey nice fanfic, it looks interesting so far, i would like to see more, oh but one tiny comment though (sorry i'm picky) Instead of saying "she" all the time be a bit adventerous and say other things like he young/pretty/small girl or Rinoa occasionaly. Other than that great stuff awaiting your next chapter with pure anticipation... :)