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Blissful Delight
2009-12-16 . chapter 9
hi majah! here i am!! yup yup, i am reading this coz 'Inc' was a great story and i thought 'Covens' must be too. AND IT IS! OMG, WHeN WILL YOU UPDATE?? PLEASE, I LOVE BOTH STORIES! IF YOU HAVE READ MY REVIEW, PLEASE, PM ME!! SO THAT I KNOW, COZ I LEFT A REVIEW IN 'INC' AND I DON´T KNOW IF YOU READ IT! DID YOU? Again, when will you update?? i loved this story, mostly coz i love vampire-stuff ;)
Please, update soon!
Agus-chan
Rennie
2009-11-11 . chapter 9
Just wanted to remind you to try to update your stories especially this one! I've been loving this story since...three years ago. Do keep writing and updating! :D
chasingleaves
2009-11-06 . chapter 9
OMG, WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE THIS STORy? I WANT MORE DD:
Tsita
2009-10-02 . chapter 9
YOU NEED TO UPDATE! THE FIRST TIME I READ THIS WAS MY FREASHMAN YEAR OF HIGH SCHOOL! I AM NOW A FRESHMAN AGAIN IN COLLAGE AND IT'S THE SAME!

I've had it bookedmarked since then too. This has some very good plotting so far and I really really think you should carry on.

How can you do this the readers who love and adore youu!! We live off your stories and you haven't fed us in years! We'll slowly die ya know!

Keep writting!!
renyun
2009-04-29 . chapter 9
PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY! :D

I been checking updates since...a long time (countless T.T) I really do love it. I enjoy the whole story plot, characters, everything. ^ ^

Now I feel like I have an obligation to remind you. So please, please update when you have the time. Anxiously waiting.
brownie bunny
2009-04-21 . chapter 9
This has one has awesome potential! MAN!! I wish you would continue with the fic! Somehow, imagining how it might turn out doesn't have quite the charm that reading it written by the author has!!
j
2009-04-06 . chapter 9
I have fallen in love with your story. The characters have stayed so integral to how they were originally portrayed that I find myself reacting with the same squeals and happy feelings I had while I watched Card Captors as a young child.

I love your plot. It's enthralling, giving just enough detail to keep my eyes anxiously scanning the page. I want to know so much more about this world you've created, and the questions only start with "What does Sakura's name mean?"

The relationship between all of your character's is so deep and tangled; it is very much real and I cannot wait to read the rest of everyone's complexities.

Li and Sakura's relationship has fast become my favorite. If only I actually knew stuff about vampire myths, then maybe I would understand it all a little better-like what is implied he was trying to do with his fangs...?

Your English grammar has improved much throughout this story, though tenses still seem to cause problems-mainly staying in a present tense instead of switching over to the proper tense.

Despite this, your words flow effortlessly. I am amazed at how many words I have actually read and how much time I have spent reading this story as it seemed like only a few minutes. I applaud you for this amazing feat.

I cannot wait to enjoy more of your story! Thank you so much for writing this.

P.S. I agree with your choice for genre-it just doesn't seem 'horror' at all yet-despite Li's multiple kills.

P.P.S. I guess I may never find the answers to my questions-you haven't updated in three years. This is too bad, your story is one of the most excellent piece of fiction I have ever read. Anyway, thank you for posting this much; it has been very enjoyable so far. Here is hoping for a continuation eventually!
AiA
2009-03-30 . chapter 9
WA! YOU MUST! MUST! MUST UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY!! IT IS AT THE TOP OF MY LIST!! YOU ABSOLUTELY, POSTIVELY HAVE TO UPDATE! AND SOON!

WA, I LOVE THIS STORY!

XOXO
AiA
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
ehmagawd! total goosebumps! we love it :D
un-perfectionist
2009-03-15 . chapter 9
WAHH!I luv this fan fiction!-just added it to my fav and alert- I hope you finish Incorporated -luv this fan fiction too- so you can go on with "The Covens Underneath"
Polaris-Sakura
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
Please update this story. I love all of your story. One of the brilliant author on this net. Very creative and unique. Since you update Incorporated, please don't forget this story too... ;p
Tess
2009-02-20 . chapter 5
Ahh reunited!! Yay! too bad he won't remember her when he changes back!
Another great chapter !!
Tess
2009-02-20 . chapter 2
Ahh I think I know where this is heading! But I could be totally wrong haaha!
Great chapter!! Full of suspence and I love itt!
Calks89
2009-02-20 . chapter 9
Being caught once again horribly bored at work and with nothing to do, I decided to browse deviant art and came across a link to this story. The comment claimed it to be possibly one of the best CCS fanfictions ever and with my curiosity peaked, I decided I had to at least have a taste.

The summary was intriguing and enticed me into reading the prologue, and then I had to read chapter 1 … and then chapter 2 … and before I’d knew it I’d read all nine chapters currently available. Suffice to say, I got hooked! Your writing style is easy to read and draws you into the story until you feel you are there with the characters, watching the scenes unfold. I can’t wait to read more and discover the stories behind these characters. I’m excited to see how the relationships develop and what mysteries are unveiled.
Tess
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
Aw Sakura is so cute! haha
Great chapter so far!! I can't wait to read the rest!!
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