I'm not too sure what to make of this, but it was definitely on the creepy side. Itachi as a cold, ruthless killer just doesn't fit anymore, given all the canon events, but you still portray twisted Itachi extremely well.

Thanks for sharing.

I read this after I just finished rereading the Itachi and Sasuke fight (the final one...sniffle) and I must say, I love your Itachi. I love him all the time, but you portray him very twisted...^_^
I really do think that the final fight ended on itachi's terms...and not because Sasuke stabbed/kirin-ed/attacked him...may he rest in (relative) peace.

How on earth did you make me see Itachi in...well, not exactly a positive light...but as a protagonist! (For the protagonist does not always have to be good, just have to want him to succeed.) I almost felt sorry for him...NO! Okay, NO! He's an evil, twisted genius, you are not allowed to feel sorry for him, he needs to crawl into a hole and die! Absolutely no feeling sorry!

So, anyway, you're a genius, have a cookie.

Good story

Wow. I happened to stumble this very well written piece of yours and it's great! Even though you hate Itachi that is, but the way you potray his character was so Itachi-like. *two thumbs up!*

you truly hate itachi, even after writing this?

aw, sad. Itachi's so evil...but so cute.

Last sentence was so poignant...

O: gasp... though you hate itachi, that was a good fic :D

Guh. Amazing. The most convincing portrayal of Itachi I have ever read. It's so real that I could smell the blood on his uniform. Well done for actually managing to get into his head, and in such a convincing way.
I am awed.

Great character study, the beginning was slow but once it got going, was great

Itachi is a strange character, and I expect that this is how he would feel. As expected, lovely.

Haunting and amazing. Excellent writing.

Great fic! Really well-written, and you did a great job of keeping Itachi in-character.

Itachi...

I swear, your writing is too good. (Um. This is the third time I've said this. Shall I continue to count?)