  S.J.M.
2008-06-25 . chapter 1 Is it Iroh? |
  leaping-leeches
2008-04-19 . chapter 22Didn't they have Earth water fire or something...? Ehh... great story by the way! |
Katie
2007-06-27 . chapter 7 Commander is not a higher rank than General. Admiral and General are equal, and in the Fire Nation Navy Commander is just under Admiral. Great story by the way. |
 ElementistMagicAkua
2006-05-28 . chapter 14YOSHIRO ISN'T VERY SMART, IS SHE? |
ElementistMagicAkua
2006-05-28 . chapter 2HOW DO YOU PRONOUNCE XOKKU? |
ElementistMagicAkua
2006-05-28 . chapter 1THE GENERAL'S NAME IS ZHAO. |
Josh
2006-04-24 . chapter 1 I read it and man was it cool and funny.Plus it had a real good story |
Katara**
2006-04-21 . chapter 1 I have no idea what general it is. Nice story though, but I hate it when storys don`t contenue! |
Erin
2006-04-09 . chapter 8 Short attention span much, S.E.? |
Erin
2006-04-09 . chapter 7 It doesn't make much scince so far... |
Erin
2006-04-09 . chapter 6 Zuko, right? i bet it's zuko. or zhao...not good! |
Erin
2006-04-09 . chapter 5 don't get it but lol |
Erin
2006-04-09 . chapter 2 lol |
 XEye-Of-The-WolfX
2006-02-16 . chapter 27YAY! GOOD STORY! PARTAY! ((Streamers and Stuff)) Newton, my imaginary friend says hi and congrats on the story! |
Orcadia
2006-02-14 . chapter 14 Okay, for Chapter 14, I couldn't see the Fire Nation using Gallows. Not them. I'd see beheading, or maybe Burning, but not Hanging.
But I love your FanFic. It is Awesome.
-Orcadia |
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