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Reviews for: Pick up Lines
Redhead2
2005-12-04 . chapter 1
Short, cute, right to the point.
zephy-mama
2005-07-11 . chapter 1
nice chapter
FireBug
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
h t t p : / / w w w . f a n f i c t i o n . n e t / s / 2 4 5 5 1 8 8 / 1 /
Redhead2
2005-06-15 . chapter 1
It's me. This was nice. I liked the stress level. I'm not sure I like the insinuation that Bren and Shal are fighting but I'll live with it. I think you had Jesse pegged really well.
brigitta1
2005-06-14 . chapter 1
aw! That was a sweet end!

Lexa and Jesse together forever!
I have definitely become a fan of them!

Nice story,

greetz!
ali09
2005-06-14 . chapter 1
Yeah! I love this story, but of course you know that already :) We haven't talked in forever! Find me, I'll try to be on
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