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Jada Ryl
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
This is histerical! I love it! This witch here must be half-Jadis and half Green Lady!
midnight knightress
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
LOL
Hilarious.
And to think all that evil from one harmless cookie!?
asdfjkl;
2007-10-16 . chapter 1
wow. that was really good. until you dropped the line about "greedy american corporations." which kinda killed the mood.
Mari Braveheart
2007-10-05 . chapter 1
I died laughing. Literally. I don't know how I'm managing to type this review.

Oh. So I'm not dead. That explains a lot. (blinks)

It didn't come quite back to the beginning, but pretty close. You could polish up the ending a little more. That is, if you're nitpicky. I am. Which is why I only have one story up. (blatant advertising)
Glitterfuck
2006-06-23 . chapter 1
Man, the last line priceless. Nice humor you got there. :)
Narnian magic
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
LOL!
novitas
2006-06-11 . chapter 1
This was...

Hilarious.

(and somewhat scary.)

But hilarious nonetheless.
varletun
2006-06-08 . chapter 1
That is really... Really strange, in an odd, strangely pleasing way, lol. It made me laugh and I'm not sure why.

Oh, and I love this line:

"If she has murdered you, then she will have done just what witches do, use people to get things they want, which, come to think of it, is not unlike some greedy American corporations."

So random and out of place, and yet, so smoothly inserted that it's perfect.
Nice. :)
Brilliant Genius Number 7
2006-04-20 . chapter 1
that was funny, odd, but oddly funny.

...can i have a cookie?
xSlytherclaWx
2006-03-01 . chapter 1
funny but weird... i do remember that story though- if you give a mouse a cookie- i read that in first grade (SO long ago like 7 or 8 years)
DarkLightningEnvy
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
Well, I'm never giving a witch a cookie..
Very well written. And a very good point is made to. I'm glad I finally found the time to read this!
-DarkLightningEnvy-
-Jess-
WishingStarr
2005-12-22 . chapter 1
Nice story! Very very funny...and probably quite true!!
Nathalia Potter
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
**giggles loudly**

Funny! I love it!
Catrocks
2005-11-21 . chapter 1
Very nice. Cute idea, good follow through. ALl that good stuff.

Also, thanks for reviewing my story and to the Lucy-should-not-envy-Susan comment I say, "Amen"

Keep writting!
Lauren Wagner
2005-11-11 . chapter 1
hehe this was such a cute story. I couldn't help but laugh out loud while reading it. *snickers uncontrollably* awesome
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