Aw...Wash is so awkwardly interested and Zoe is so awkwardly suspicious. I like it.

I loved this story! So very sweet!

"Crewmates? Distant acquaintances? Total . . . strangers . . ."

Hahahaha...

I loved it. It was EXCELLENT. I love Zoe/Wash. XD

Another beautiful fic. You write dialog very well and have perfectly captured the characters. This is a lovely sequel. More?

Love, love love lovelovelove. Perfect!

YAY!

I always enjoy a good sequel--especially when it is as well written as the first in the series!

I loved both of your Wash/Zoe stories. You did an awesome job on capturing their voices. I'd look forward to a second sequel, if you were planning on making one.

Way cute! You have Wash's voice especially really well. Two things I'm not clear on: isn't Wash blond, not redheaded? And why is Zoe so offended that he might be hitting on her?

*giggle* I love it! Just adorable. You really have their characters down pat, you know. A great job.

This (and the prequel story I clicked through to get to) really made my day and put a huge goofy grin on my face. Spot-on characterizations, in my opinion, of my most favorite of the crew. Thanks for posting it!

I'm not a writer myself, so I don't feel qualified to offer the "well-rounded critique" that the review box tells me is the most rewarding, so I hope you're okay with me just telling you I adored this story and it totally made my morning.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Ah, Wash and his manliness. I loved this tale of Wash and Zoe's tentative beginnings. Having read a few of your H/G HP stories, I've always appreciated your work. I'm glad to see you continuing with my favorite couple from this show. Being a peanut butter cup fan myself, I can understand how a few pieces of candy would help bring them together.

Aw! Wow! Sweet and real and very in character. I went to go read Sweet Tooth, too, but I didn't review that one. It was great, too. Mucho wonderful. I want a Reese's cup now...M.

Mosylu, I'm so delighted to see a sequel to this wonderful new story-arc in the Firefly world. Once again, you are bang on with the emotional motivations of Wash and Zoe. Thanks for a great treat! :)