Reviews for On the Knees Before the Altar

Reviews For: On the Knees Before the Altar

Doppleganger
2005-06-14
ch 1, anon.

abuseVery nice addition. I liked how you've chiseled out Rion's character to be so much more than eyecandy. I must admit that Orinaeus is more comic relief in my story but he does have his moments. I liked the description on Rion's outfit. Wish I were an artist. I really want to see the visual on that. LOL

His words were moving in a way that even (being in disagreement) I stopped to hear what he had to say.

Nice touch how you are including aspects of Greg's Master Plan into your storyline including those who want to be worshipped as Gods, the ones that want peace with humans, and the separatists. Does this mean you are going to include Sphinx and Terry Chung?

Oddly enough I could see Rion talking to John Canmore (Castaway). He is so bitter and yet Rions words could soothe even the Hunter's lust for revenge. Same could be said for Demona. Or even Demona urging (and helping) Helios to continue with his plans. *shrugs*

R.M
2005-06-14
ch 1, anon.

abuseA well-paced story, it's always good to see Helios get knocked down a peg. We got more of an insight on how Rion looks, and he does look interesting, I didn't like him at first but he's growing on me, always a good sign. I didn't like Ares, though, even though it was great seeing him knock Helios over. Rion and Ares as a couple? Okay, now that's just weird. XD

Hmm, so Julius isn't a cantaur, cyclops, minotaur or satyr. I guess the only one I can come up with is a gryphon/gryffin/however-it's-spelled. Overall, it was a good story that got me to like Rion much better than last time, great job.

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