 NinjaMisha 2006-03-21 . chapter 4 Hey great story so far! I know it's been a while since up updated this, but I do hope you plan to eventually write another chapter^_~ I'm really enjoying this story so far:) Good job and keep up the good work!! ^_^ |
 phantomshadowdragon 2006-01-12 . chapter 4Is this a gladiator place that Aang and co. have been captured by? |
 Kari Nirvash 2005-12-23 . chapter 4Hey! Jst writing this to tell you I exist. I don't really have any suggstions except I think you should make you chapters longer. Oh and I added this story to my favorites!
-Bunny* |
 aangsair 2005-06-27 . chapter 4 pretty good, there are still a few places where you put the word in the wrong tense, or whatever.
i can't wait for the next chapter, update soon. :) |
 FlyingLemur 2005-06-26 . chapter 4 I exist! Keep writing, I want to know what happens! |
 KimchiCrusader 2005-06-15 . chapter 3I'm really wondering how this is going to turn out-I'm completely lost by the fact that Sokka encountered an earthbender and Katara a waterbender, yet (I assume) are in the same place. So many questions, you know how to keep me hooked. XD |
 YoungGrasshopper7 2005-06-15 . chapter 2Who! This is a mysterious story. Please do more chapters!
Let this be a lesson to you...young grasshopper. :) |
 FlyingLemur 2005-06-15 . chapter 2Wow, this is well-written! |
 JBmusiclover08 2005-06-14 . chapter 1nice. write more soon please. |
 KimchiCrusader 2005-06-14 . chapter 1Woah.
I have to say, this is extremely impressive! You're amazingly descriptive, and it allows each paragraph to flow nicely until the end of the chapter, which is a heart-speeding cliffhanger.
I really like it so far, and I humbly ask you to keep writing. :) |