Great story. A very good moral for our young queen and I just *loved* the insight on Obi-Wan. I had imagined a reaction out of him similar to what your story described. Then again (God, I'm never gonna shut up, am I?) maybe Qui-Gon didn't *need* to express his fatherly love for his padawan, *because of* their bond. You know, sort of telepathy/empathy thing.

Very powerful story! I just stumbled on to this and glad I found it!

Good job!

i love that! this fic had me crying, i just love it! It is so sweet. Obi Wans feelings about how is masters last words were of Anakin, it is just a brilliant fic!

that was really really good. i liked it alot. poor obi.:(

Exelent fic! Very sad, but not quite enough to make me cry.

That was sooooo very beautiful! Wish I could write like you!

An interesting perspective, and well written. I'll have to read more of your work :)

Wow *wipes tears from here eyes* That was sad. *sniff*

Ayod

Wow... great job on this fic. Poor Obi-Wan!

I teared up there for Obi-Wan, especially his rememberance of Qui-Gon's last words and who they were for. The comment about Jedi's keeping there emotions too much in check is compelling, I've wondered if it might be their one great weakness-that they try too hard to balance all their emotions and never quite succeed. Even Yoda gets irritated :)

Well written. Captivating in its emotion. Loved it.

That made me cry! I love obi-wan...he was my favorite character in the whole series, personally...

AWWWWWW! That was so cute. It was written in 'sorta a poetic way. I really loved it. I need a tissue *snif*

I could almost hear "Crash and Burn" as I read this! The Obi-angst fics are always my favorites. ;) Keep writing, and may the Force be with you!

Another excellent story! I really do love your command of more emotional pieces, though I'm not experienced enough in Star Wars stuff yet to offer any helpful notes on whether or not you've caught the characters. I know you do Harry Potter characters very well, though...!