Damn! I love Yuki and Hiro! They are completely hilarious! And I love how Yuki is a monster without his coffee! Too funny! Really well done! It's very hard to write an original character and many others that I read are so…hollow for lack of a better word. But your elves are definately not! :)

ok I love the Miroku, Kagome characters and story... I hate how it ended! It's your story though. I loved the elf's they are awesome. I really hated Inu and sango in this... especially Inu. Now I have to go read a good Inu story. Keep writing it was good. Maybe another Miroku and kagome fic. Don't be so cruel to poor Inu, he has cute puppy ears!

Umm.. no offence, but don't you think that your Inuyasha is a bit... infernal? Like, seriously.

I think you should seriously write second story to this, only make it a Inu/Kag. Despite what the other reviewers think. Inuyasha was considerate for along time. And he mated her to save her life. Kagome still loved him, even though she didn't want to.

It would be nice to see Shippo, Kiara, Sesshomaru, Inuyasha and the elves again. Inuyasha has had 500 years to redeem himself... I'd read it. Even when he kidnapped her he was still concerned about her safety, He could be a good guy in the future. He's simply waiting on his mate.

It's not like he could have anyone else through those years, they mate for life. What else is he to do?

Phew ! Thankgod Inuyasha warned them ! :D Seriously, I am starting to hate Sango? Well, whatever .. Luckily Miroku and Kagome are still together ! xD yay!

Whyyy Sesshomaruu ?! WHYYYY ?! :'(

Sesshomaru : Hn.
AkiraChan : ... (O_O ) LOL

Hahaha ! xDD I can imagine Miroku in rage with those interuptions !:))

AkiraChan :HA! Serves him right ! :D I've always Loved MirKag PAIRINGS !XD
Sango : I thought you liked InuSag (Inuyasha & Sango) ?
AkiraChan: Shut up whore (-_- ) ..
Sango : Aww :'(

LOL very funny ending, I would love to see how Miroku would react to Kagome having Inu's baby. Overall good story and very happy

Inuyasha's a stupid bastard that just can't take rejection.

Holy crap! I lve this fic, the ending was both beautiful and fucking you so much I had an amazing time reading it :)

I had read this story one other time and forgotten how it ended. it's sad that she will be forced to live with her rapist's child. Inu was such an SOB. It is well written, though.

Really?

First he cheats on her and treats her like crap.

Then he pratically rapes her when he bites her against her will.

Intrudes on her time with Miroku and 'sends' his displeasure, aka. pain whenever she's with him.

She loses hers and Miroku's child.

THEN he uses her want to stay with Miroku against her to have sex with her.

JUST to survive 500 years to continue being a stalker and to make sure she 'knows' that he's around, thus torturing her and miroku

NOT TO MENTION that you make her pregnant with that bastards child?

AND THEN to have him say he's gonna wait till the right time to swoop in and take kagome and/or the baby against their will.

So the bad guy won? That's kind of sad...and irritating. Sigh.

But I do understand it was your story and that I don't have to like it. It was very enjoyable up until the last chapter.

Jen

This was such an awesome story

In some parts of the story I sympathized with Inuyasha though. It seemed as if he was at least trying to see Kagome happy rather it be with him or Miroku, at least until he goes all psycho with trying to kidnap Kagome, rape her etc. Sango however was such a bitch in this story, and I kept wishing for her to die, or at least learn what she was doing was wrong.

I usually read Sess/kag Inu/kik or Inu/san stories but this Mir/kag one didn't fail me, and I'm glad to have read this story.

i loved this storie!