*wiping tears from her face* That was beautiful. Truly beautiful. I cried. Quite a bit at the end. *sniffle* Beautiful. Just beautiful.

why did you have to go and kill sara? this was also a very short chapter for me. More could have been written about the hunt to free Sara. Please say that you are not going to just leave it there. I feel like there is more to this and this should not be the end.

Mi gusta LeAnn...and I dunno Jack diddly 'bout Laby...*hangs head* But that's ok you know jack Diddly bout DragonLance HA!

BTW people the E-mail addy does not work sorry

You killed off Sarah? Why? There was no point! I knew there was a character death but I assumed because of the prophecy it was going to be one of the twins...I wasn't happy about it but I steeled myself for it...poor Jareth...sorry, I don't mean to grumble but I was really enjoying this, the ending spoiled it for me.

whats next write more

cool keep it up

Woohoo! Next chapter, next chapter! Very good now onward to the next chapter;)

I liked this... Post more soon! :)

Please write more soon!

Oh, yay! A sequel! Very nice, cant wait to see what Sarah and Victoria have planed:) Next chapter soon!