I just read "First Kiss," so I was checking out some of your other stories . . .another tearjerker, but from the opposite point of view. You really are a good writer when it comes to GSR (it's my favorite ship on CSI, and also out of a lot of my other interests).
-Hannah

Wicked sad, you brought me close to tears at the end. And that's impressive...I really don't cry much.

I like how you write, with more than competence, skill. I hope to think of my own CSI story sometime, but until then I'm quite happy reading yours. (:

-Sienna

Wow. Um. Wow. Thats all I have to say is wow. Loved it!

that is sad. so very sad. you know how to capture emotion and i think griss might really do that scene if it were to happen seems like you nailed him...good job

Wow! Another powerful story! How is it that you've only got 2 stories out? More please? I love your writing style!
~L~

It brought tears to my eyes, I loved it! are you going to continue it?
i kinda hope so, but then I am a whimp and might cry, so I don't know, just that I liked it!

wow. im not realy big on gsr stories but i love this one! continue soon!