Why haven't you finished this story? You write very well and it seems so far to be a very good story and I'm interested in where it will go. It's sexy and dark but not trashy. The emotions seem real and I would love to read more. You did a really good job with this.

I love your story. Please update.

Please, please update. (begs)

Wow. Interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

great story, i like your take on grissom. please update soon?

I love your work. Let me just get that out now. It is the only CSI fanfic I actually like. :)
You HAVE to write the next one in Your Adored One! Hurry! :)
Thanks!

Hey,

I love your story Your Adored One. Unfortunately I can't access the link you posted. I'm giddy to read chapter 5, so please email me your website link.

thanks
Miss U

I found your homepage-thanks

Great chapter. I am very intrigued. (>-)

There's nothing on your profile and there is no website at this chapter - where is it? I'm looking forward to this chapter.

Another sublime chapter - slowly and sensuously written. Looking forward to more.

this could get dangerous!
i'm excited keep going!

i'm intrigued, facinated, bowled over - the whole nine yards. Can't wait to read more

Oh, so so good. Can't wait for more!!

Very nice. It's dark, but emotional. Sexy too. Maybe you could use more character development though...