Awesome!

Great work

Short and sweet. Good job!

ermhrm interesting its like a story in parts
vamp

Funny. And ... ick.

That probably says a lot more about males and females than I'm comfortable admitting to. In fact, I've been through scenes almost exactly like that ...

you know, as a college student, we always are getting assignments about a 300 word essay, or a 3,0 word essay and ** about how much it's going to take to write it, when we notice, ten minutes later we only need 3 more words to finish it up, and we've got a whole page in our heads..

Amazing how short 100 words is. Barely a paragraph if you lump it all together.

Sweet, simple, and compeletly worth the read, brilliant.