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| marbles-chan 2008-03-25 ch 2,  | abuseHeehee, fluffypoo |
| raijutei-no-babylon 2008-02-22 ch 2, | abusei wish there was a next... |
| raijutei-no-babylon 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseoohh! it was soo cute! i love it! |
| Goddess of the Moonlit Sky 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abuseLoved it! Simply loved it! |
| Tairi Soraryu 2008-02-17 ch 2, | abuseCute story! Interesting premise, about Misao and the springtime -- I'm assuming spring has significance for Misao and her ex. I liked reading it from Aoshi's POV, and the flow of the story was great. Nice dialogue, and their argument at the end -- "you can't do that!" -- made me laugh. Perhaps could do with some polishing, but I really liked it! |
| Tairi Soraryu 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseCute story! I like the Misao/Aoshi pair, as always, and you capture Misao's insecurities perfectly. Even if Aoshi does act a little...ooc. But I like it. Good job! |
| Adelaide MacGregor 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!! I loved it, great job and well written! |
| Anonymous 2007-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuse"The world is full of stupid people. Everyone knows it" I was just wondering if you got this from the Refreshments song, Banditos. There is a line in the song that goes "Everyboyd knows that the world is full of stupid people." Just wondering. Besides that, your writing is great. I really enjoy your stories and can find no flaws to comment upon. |
| naash 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abusehey i liked it. it wasn't fluffy at all. Some fics are so fluffy that i can't bring myself to read it. so good job |
| blackartemis 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseKAWAII! |
| angie 2005-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThats is soo nice to read!.. hehe made me very very happy.. |
| andrei li 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww!! Soo cute! Poor Misao tho, not being able to get into the club... But if she did, this wouldn't have happened ne? Anyways, great story! I esp luved this part : "You better not think that kissing will get you out of trouble either." Unable to help himself, Aoshi began to laugh. =P Hehe! |
| aquafinaSEK 2005-07-28 ch 1, | abuseLove ur story! Please write many more chapters! PRETTY PLEASE! Sorry I'm so wierd, but again, love ur story so it'd b gr8 if u wrote another or more chaps. L8er! |
| GreenEyedFloozy 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I luffed it! ^_^ |
| autumndays 2005-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it. Warm musshy glow sort of stuff. |