You really get into Jin's head. Great fic!

Fluffyness is my all-time favorite guilty pleasure. I'm glad I could indulge it in such an awesomely written fic. Jin's thought process is rather interesting, and the thinking behind Mugen's seemingly one-track mind is rather surprising. What I certainly liked the most in this fic was the insight in their actions, and how they touched upon them. It was pretty deep. And funny.
I wish you would write more of this, but it would probably ruin the special factor of this one-shot ): . Still much loved, nonetheless.

P.S. The last line is pure gold!

That was very poignant. And cute. Adorable, really.

: )

~Kat

purplepenguin25@yahoo

Thank you. This is exactly what I wanted to read, and exactly what I see in their relationship. I'm glad you could put it into words for me.

Needless to say, the writing and characterization is very good!

i like this!

Was this a one shot?

That was funny, and tender. I loved how you followed the path of Jin's thoughts, his detours and his negations. It was wonderful, and the end was... oh, so not-fluffy-when-it-could-have-been-pink-and-creamy.

Great fic.

I had a lot to say, but... the last line takes the cake. 以上. ^_^

haha, love it! i favor the jin/fuu pairing. love the tension btwn the two guys here. hilariously done, beatufitully written.

o my jin!

This is just such a fabulous story. Thank you for writing it. I loved your presence inside Jin's mind. :)

This is excellent. This is wonderful! Very funny and yet at the same time there is substance.
Beautifully done. Like a painting almost. It came together wonderfully.

Good god, this is just all kinds of awesome and then some! I'm so adding it to my favorites.

This was great! A little bit funny in an dark way, and serious/heartfelt without being annoying.

I'm a bit lost, but you could say I'm a leaf on the current. With the current. In the current. Current current currant. Hm. Cake. Anyway. Vair, you know, original. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina