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| BlackMoon 2008-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this! |
| iluvjellybeans 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWas this a one shot? |
| Sambucivox 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was funny, and tender. I loved how you followed the path of Jin's thoughts, his detours and his negations. It was wonderful, and the end was... oh, so not-fluffy-when-it-could-have-been-pink-and-creamy. Great fic. |
| Swirly 2007-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI had a lot to say, but... the last line takes the cake. 以上. ^_^ |
| anonnie 2007-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha, love it! i favor the jin/fuu pairing. love the tension btwn the two guys here. hilariously done, beatufitully written. |
| Kanamelover 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseo my jin! |
| Fandomme 2007-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is just such a fabulous story. Thank you for writing it. I loved your presence inside Jin's mind. :) |
| wickedsugarrush 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is excellent. This is wonderful! Very funny and yet at the same time there is substance. Beautifully done. Like a painting almost. It came together wonderfully. |
| Lonicera Japonica 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseGood god, this is just all kinds of awesome and then some! I'm so adding it to my favorites. |
| DidosLament 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! A little bit funny in an dark way, and serious/heartfelt without being annoying. |
| bobalina 2006-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm a bit lost, but you could say I'm a leaf on the current. With the current. In the current. Current current currant. Hm. Cake. Anyway. Vair, you know, original. Keep writing! Toodles, bobalina |
| Aliora 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseExcellent Jin-voice with some amusing moments of humour sprinkled between some insightful observations on the characters. I especially liked the idea of Fuu as redemption; beautifully done. Wonderful writing. |
| angel-tears-16 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI amazed by the completeness of such a short work. Many authors strive for that kind of finality for their endings with little success. I am impressed, |
| iTomato 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAhh, this was great! Humorous in the perverse sense, of course, but well written indeed! :D |
| wellduh... 2006-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseHave seen this before but skipped it until now because it sounded vaguely racy and anything vaguely racy about the three kind of weirds me out. But decided to read it this time, and am sure happy I did. I love your Jin's point-of-view! Loved the humor and reflection and the thing with the swords, that was marvelous. Wonderful interaction between them all. Great read. |