THAT SETH IS SO SICK!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OO! They can't kill Ryou they just can't. He's too adorable and nice and innocent.

CRIES that was a terrible ending! Poor BABY D: Gosh I was sorta hoping that there was gonna be a part at the bottom where it shows a brief thing about them being reincarnated but... My gosh, very sad ending, but I loved it so much! :3 I've noticed that at the beginning you're always like "shame curtain this chapter's so short and shitty" but noooo, you're such a talented writer, between this and Control (don't worry, I read the revised version! :3) and also Control II I've felt so much happiness and sadness and, it's amazing how a fanfic can make you feel so much, eh? Well keep writing, and dont ever think you're not talented at writing! :3

You sob in a good way though. You made the second story on this site to bring a tear to my eye.

why would you leave ryou all alone? its so sad.

i loved it! omg it made me cry!

*cries*

(DON'T READ THIS REVIEW IF YOU AREN'T FINISHED WITH THE FANFIC!)

Bakura died! *cries* You KILLED him! I loved the story and it was all sweet and fluffy and then he DIED! *slashes wrists in a corner*

U-um... *muffled sob* I really liked this story; those two were so damn cute.. *still sobbing* and it's sad that they only got one week. ONE! T.T

they didnt have guns in ancient Egypt 0.0 oh well XD

one thing-you let Ryou get rappled, and yet you refuse to say ass? XD

aw!

Yay! Setho is dead! LETS HOPE THE ARMY OF DEMON MAGGOTS OF HELL RAPE HIM! :3 XD jk, im not THAT pycho...I dont think...anyway, really gewd

Oh, why cant Setho (thats what I call him. Setho xD) be real so I can kick his arse? And why can't Ryou be real so I can comfort him and let him snuggle in my bed with my gaint pink quilty XD

OH, IMA KILL SETO D: XD omg, hes raping Ryou...D: por Bakura, and Ryou

Aw...

wow, that was great. and the epilgue didnt leave me tearing my hair out wither. Kudos on that_

wonderful sotry line though, very sweet

-s.o