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fuji-addict
2007-04-12 . chapter 4
Mou, it's such a shame if you're not going to continue this...This is one of the kinds of story I am looking for here in the PoT fandom...I really wish you could continue this...
i-see-faeries
2007-01-20 . chapter 4
Aw, this is really nice, if not just a little inaccurate. The slowness makes the story more believeable. I wish you would update. ^^
Triple Soul
2006-05-03 . chapter 4
... is it over...? Why don't you update anymore? It's a sugoi ficcie! I really really hope you continue!
Fuji and Eiji's Girl
2006-04-07 . chapter 4
It's really good! Keep it up! I hope ya update soon! Later!
~Fuji and Eiji's Girl
Autumn Ice
2006-01-07 . chapter 2
I think you have a good start for a story. You've given a lot of background on the characters, especially the changes, which is nice to see. The interactions between the first years is cute, and Yamato is always fun to read about.

One thing though (and this is just my personal opinion): your use of Japanese. I find it distracting to read a story with random foreign words thrown in, especially when there are English equivalents; it tends to detract from the overall story, because you aren't writing in Japanese, so why are you adding in Japanese dialogue? Also, middle school is read as "chugakkou", not "chuugaku"; similarily, elementary school is "shougakkou". Tournament is "taikai". And "rei" is literally "bow".
SilkStar
2005-12-10 . chapter 4
i think this story is so cool! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it up!
Fightingdreamer5
2005-12-09 . chapter 4
Its really good! Your not going to end it there are you? Update soon!
badluck-ngprod
2005-08-21 . chapter 4
Good story. Good characterization. Will be insteresting how you continue to develop the story. More... More... More...
Kooriyoukai
2005-07-26 . chapter 4
This story is quite amazing, and so far for four chapters I've been stunned by the flawless characterizations and the alternative perspective being taken on this particular group. You've done an excellent job giving everyone their respective time "on screen" and I've been enjoying the slight mystery surrounding Fuji, but most of all I feel like I'm finally seeing the series I wanted to see all along in Prince of Tennis, a story about the original, 3rd year regulars and their climb to greatness, instead of Ryoma's story starting as a first year. Your blend of Japanese has been enjoyable too, unlike many other stories I've read where the usage has been done in ignorance or to just sound cool, so I applaud you on applying it so well throughout the story. I look forward to seeing more, and how everyone's relationships develop and grow, so this is definitely going on my favorites list :)
konnistique
2005-07-22 . chapter 4
poor Tezzie-bear.. XD wait scatch that, poor freshmen! =/ good chapter even though this happens to be a very late review... Nyahahaha... =D
yamatoforever
2005-07-21 . chapter 4
How could Fuji be so ignorant about his own ability? That he is a tensai? It's so sad that everyone misunderstood him. And Tezuka even gave him a cold shoulder. I think Tezuka would say something harsh when Fuji would try to help in clean-duty. Please post the next chapter quickly! Uhm, and I really want to know about what people says about Fuji outside he was a tensai.
harukaze
2005-07-19 . chapter 4
well this fic is going along nicely.. they're not ooc and eveything in the fic seems perfect.. great job. i'm really enjoying this.. so plz..update whenever u can. here's to hoping for a quick one
cracked.TURTLE
2005-07-13 . chapter 4
Wow...this is going really good!! I wonder what's up with Fuji...hmm...cant wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
Evening Lilacs
2005-07-13 . chapter 4
Cool story! :)
ennov
2005-07-13 . chapter 4
This is nice haha its really good to look back wat happrn to then when they are in year one and i wonder wat fuji is hiding of at least wat is his past... haha keep up the good work and update it soon...
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