Daine's death? SWEET!

oh i think its great! i just read it in one go, i like the way that tekk's character develops. i want to know what happens next! i did love daine though!

Wow. The only word for it... Wow.

Yousa mean mean child! *sniff sniff* Poor Daine! lol, Actually I could care less. This story is good, and I like the plot. Now.. to read on!

I just want you to know that your stories stink and that Kit/Skysong in a female dragon, not a male gragon, and that it's 'Stormwings' not

'Stormsings'. Honestly, have you even read the books? Stop writing fics if you can't get the characters right. (and if you can't right a better story than this). Plus don't complain when you get flamed. Storyies like yours are bound to get flamed a lot. DAINE FOREVER!

Okay, I'm not exaggerating here...This is honestly one of the best TP fanfics I've ever read! Jaunne, really reminded me of a sort of Darth Vader on the side of the good guys, and Tekk, and Rowan are really awesome half-humans. Farrah...She was so cool! I hope that she hooks it up with Rowan! Arandiall... sounds evil, but then again so do alot of eight-year-olds. I'm gonna go add this to my favorites...I loved the pace and detail of the story! Okay, enough rambling...Thank you for writing this, I really enjoyed it :)

Lily

I like it. A bit morbid, but there, that's just me. And by the way, are you aware that Skysong/Kitten is female?

WOW! Awesome story! But isn't Skysong a girl... Oh well! Arandiall sounds awesome can't wait to hear more about him...

kewl though, i reckon alanna's more capable of being a slut than Daine and what about poor NUMIE! She KILLED him! She KILLED him! How CAN she! Poor Numie! This is an interesting story, though Daine is WAY out of character and I pity you, you have to do FRENCH!

All I can say is...wow. This is like, Tammy-quality. On to the next chapter!

This is really good. I have to keep reminding myself that this is Junipertree, not Jae, but I keep thinking it's Jae cuz the plot seems like something only Jae or someone of equal talent could pull. Good job!

I'm sorry, but this definitely has an anti-Daine theme. You could have made it good without doing this or getting mushy. I hope you come up with a decent reason for her behavior...otherwise the story will continue to be totally negative without much of a point.

great once again but i gotta say isn't it stormWING not stormSING?

First off, Im NOT flaming. it is stormWING, stormWING STORMWING. and Skysong is a SHE, he with an s

Well it's a good story, well written. I'm sorry I didn't like it much, I guess its just too radical for me, but keep up the writing, you write good...It was funny the way you made Daine a little slut..hehe