No offense, but someone with a 106 degree fever should probably be dead. Other than that, I love your story so far!

I love it! Write a sequel. Please? For me?

Emma

Uh oh. But Hughes can be trusted. Right? Right?

Emma

Wow, suspense. So how the Hell did this go from a simple 'Scar's ill' fic, to a 'Shit, the military's in Our Way Again, and we Have to Lie to Them and Will Probably Need Mustang at a Later Date' fic? I'm loving the twist, but still thinking that it's rushed.

Man, this couldn't get any better. Sitting cozy in bed, on Christmas break, no obligations, a box of pocky, a bottle of ramune, just finished Brotherhood, and the best fanfic I've read all week.

Life is good.

Oh, gosh. Now talk about a twist. But I think yes, Scar will still be welcome.

Emma

Poor Scar. The guy really needs to learn how to swim. Then again, you're right. He did grow up in a desert. Long story short, he's helpless in a river, but he sure as Hell could get through a sand storm better than me.

I was actually thinking about him the other day while my sister an I found ourselves walking home in the middle of a blizzard.

Emma

You should totally draw them! Seriously! Do you have a DiviantArt? Send me the link if you do!

By the way... I love Scar fluff like this.

Emma

Haha, nice robe, Scar. So you got it in there, after all.

Armstrong was a nice twist, and kept things from getting too boring. I think that your rushing this, though.

Emma

Again, rushed, but still amazing! A truce, yay!

Emma

Poor Scar! but wait... is this Brotherhood or the first series? He recognized the Rockbells, but was relaxed instead of tensed. Huh?

Another amazing chapter, though.

Emma

Another great chapter. though I think that your rushing it again. How about some from Scar's POV? Please?

Emma

Haha! I loved it! Again, I rally don't think that Scar of being OOC, just weak because of his illness.

Emma

I really didn't think he was all that OOC to be honest with you.

This is amazing! Your detail is great, I just think that your rushing it a bit. It's a very interesting plot, though, and I can't wait to read on!

I have a question, however. Is this the first anime or Brotherhood?

Emma

LOL! I love the last line! xD

Hmmm... T'would appear that Scar, in addition to being sick, also suffers from claustrophobia. Interesting story... I like it!