sweet and sad

Briliant fic. Very angsty, and well written

Heartwrenching. Depressing to think of team 10 dying like that "a second-rate death on a second-rate battlefield with his second-rate teammates but first-rate friends." That line is brilliant.

I loved the three sentences about weaving and measuring and cutting the thread. Isn't there something in Greek/Roman mythology or something about three women who decide everyone's fate with thread?

And the last section in italics...ah, bittersweet, i guess.

The last line, though...it was so final and almost casual that it broke my heart.

Great fic. Thanks for sharing!

wow, that was so sad and beautiful. You really captured team eight.

wonderful. it really tugs your heartstrings. the charactors are all so ... in - depth, and beautifully real.

some good angst :/ its kinda confusing actually, from what i dont understand. but from what i can understand it really good
i need to go read some more team 10...

wow. an innocent summary, an innocent title, even an innocent beginning.. Then i read to the end, and i see death. DUN DUN DUN. PADUM.

It's my first team 10 story. it's great because it was all about friendship and maybe some other stuff. cool story. :]

This is a wonderful piece, very poetic and deep. I enjoyed reading every word.

So sad.

Wow. Very powerful story you've got there. The imagery was intense and the chracterization was on point. I enjoyed reading Shikamaru's stinkweed. :-) Great job!

I like it. It's angsty and dark, but I like stories like this. I get it even more because of where I found this story - in a story by Klayter McCabe called Background Music. Great job!

God... That's so beautiful. SO sad. So true. The secondary caracters really have suckish. *sniff* ;'-(

Sad. I like it.

That was gut wrenching, and I absolutely hated the way you described Ino's death...in a good way...it was so horribly clear, and I felt like I saw it through Shika's eyes. Amazing work.

Beautiful.