Beautiful! I enjoy the style of the poem, with the interpunctations before the last word of some lines. Reminds me of Poe of some reason. Nice also how the reavilation of what the poem is about is first in the last line. A bit like the visions of Tir'na Nog'th itself, really.

Art.

Pure art.

I just finished the Amber series and I was looking for som good fanfiction and stumbled across this... quite good, very good infact. Abstract, but I enjoy it, it has its own beauty in a mystical sort of way. -Amalynne O'hara