so, I've started going through the pages of my favorite authors and reading stories that I love and I saw this one and just so you know, your writing never ceases to amaze me even though I've read almost all of the stories here several times. :)
- Rosel

that was great

I. heart. you. so. effing. much.

**huggles you and your awesome Blush**

This was really good. It was funny at times too. Terry's a smart kid. I like him. Is it bad that I love these two together so much? God I hope not.

Ah! Thank you for a wonderful story! I loved the ending.

I. Love. This. Story. Your character's voices are perfect, humorous and flow so nicely. I like reading their thoughts and the conflicts you've developed are nice. They seem natural and this is a beautiful story. Perfect.

ARG! I had this all typed out and was just finishing at the end...and I think I did something to erase this...gah! And I had some good stuff, too! *sigh*

Let's see...the highlights...
...pharaoh...time out. lol! Ah, kids...haha!
huge aw, and great scenes here.
Blink talking honestly with Terry...such an awesome scene...then Mush's self-revelation there at the end of his pov--much adoration. Also, could SO hear the emphasized 'brilliant' kind of in an ironic...dunno, but could hear it...very awesome bit.
Laugh at Blink a bit...loved the 'like he used to pin Jess' bit...uh, Blink, baby, there's your first clue...;D
Then the continuing his wishes to playing 1st base for the yankees...haha! nice...
Oh yeah! Haha...asking him to use smaller words...died there, that was great.
Fantastic job, hon...I enjoyed it immensely.
Look forward to more! XD

Nine years huh?! wow...
Fired? Aw crap... :(
Ah yes...gah. But love the biting, sarcastic synopsis of the situation. ;D Wow...not bitter at all! haha. No, understand why and where he's coming from, and completely justified--I just react in the oddest ways...anyway, onward.
Oh god! Aww...yet lol...that is the million dollar question isn't it?!?!
Wow...~NICE~
Awkward, indeed! O_o But very nice. XD
'Mikey reading to a kindergartener. Be still my beating heart. And go away, my unrequited crush. I'm an adult. I should be over this by now.' Ahaha...*adores*
Hm...ok, apparently I lied, and THIS is the million dollar question! lol!
...and through to the end...gah...just a huge wonderful aw...very nice. XD

Ooh...as always very nice tension and emotions here...drew me in right away and reading avidly to the end. ...on we go..

I only have three minutes before my internet time runs out, but I just wantd to say I love this. It's so cute and so real and so amazing and just...I love it. It's adorable and domestic and cute, and the perfect thing for a quick slash infusion before I return to my internet-less vacation.

Wow. This is good. Write a sequel or something.

Whee! Updates! You rock and so does this story!
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Please, please, please, please, please update soon! I hope I can read before I leave!
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Ryan and Mike are so sweet! And Terry is the coolest kid ever! This is awesome! I'm ending every sentence with an excmamation mark! And it's beginning to annoy me!
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i love this fic! you put alot into it and i think its awesome that you related it to gays. most people wouldnt even try to do that, but i think its great that you did. keep up the great work!

SQUEE. Just... SQUEE. Wow. I... aww. I... I... no. Not even going to try. Too filled with warm and fuzzy feelings of squee to put together coherentish sentences. Aww. AWW!

*sniffle* I love... I don't know. I just love. Everything. Because... aww. Okay. Wow. I'm going to go away now. But... aww! SQUEE!

I promise to actually review this tomorrow. Aww. Teehee.

OMG. This story was AMAZING! I have no other words to describe it ... except maybe PHENOMENAL or REALLY AWESOME! Oh man I was reading at 2 AM and I had to supress my urges to squeal with delight. Wonderfully done ... I especially like how Blink was the ... I guess the more vulnerable one? How he took the chance and made the move on Mush ... I'm so used to it being the other way around, it was fabulous! AND THEY GOT TOGETHER IN THE END! YAY! OMG okay I really loved it. :)