Wanted to read the Sesshoumaru X Kagome pairing, but it is a bit too sad for me at this moment and seems as though rather unpleasant twists are coming. *Sigh* And I really wanted a good SxK.

Fairly good story, but disappointing as I am more of a Kagome x Sesshoumaru fan. You should re post this story so that one will be only Sesshoumaru x Kagome and the other only Inuyasha x Kagome to make it easier for fans. FF . net shouldn't take it down if the stories are indeed different due to their endings, though the inuyasha x Kagome ending fic would probaby need a different title.

your right it is short.

so i read the rest of the chapter without skipping anything and i liked it. awesome story!

Wow. What a thrill ride. Kept me busy all week at work. =D
I really enjoyed the development of the characters, and how the differentiation from the original ending and the alt ending had a lot of the same points and conversations in it.
I don't know how much I agree that Sess would rather die than see Kohaku and Rin get together, but I'm in the middle of reading the manga chapters 467 - 471, which is very Sess/Rin heavy in the plot. Considering how I know the ending of the series goes, Sess/Rin doesn't seem entirely plausible, but at that point, Rin can't be more than 13. (Which if you want links to the end, send me a PM)
This has also gotten me thinking about some of my old fics from way back when I wrote on a regular basis. It definitely put me in the mood for a re-write on one of them.
Anyway, enough of the wall of text
Ja ne!

you should make more of the inu/kag version

hello i am throughly enjoying your story although right now it seems as if its a Sesshoumaru and RIN story not a sesshoumaru and KAGOME story anywhos right now i'll keep reading and see how it ends if you have any comments or things as such please feel free to email me...
Arigatou and Ja!!

Wow. The S/K stroyline was really cute. This was going in my favs UNTIL that last chapter. What the hell? It just veered from poignant reminiscing while still happy into plain bitterness. Oh well, it's your story. You can give it a horrible and angsty if you really want. =)

nice

This is such a Kawaii story!! i love it so much!! greart job its really beautiful.

Hehe. Great story. I'm glad that you did write an alternative ending ;p. I love the description and how you managed to keep the characters in character. Great job on that.

Also, @ clitched plots #3, 2 words: Stockholm syndrome !!

But gwuahahah. I loved the list of Cliched plots and Cliched plot devices and standard OOC character behavior lists! Good job on everything overal!

OMFG u totally changed my view on SessXkag pairings. I cried so hard during the alternate ending, it was a lot darker. OMFG! U KILLED OFF RIN!!

I am impressed and am glad you had an alternate ending. Your story is pretty true to life when it comes to having to choose between two loves. One of childhood and one of adulthood. I myself am in the process of this. Your story was comforting.

Dani

MORE FLUFF! Sorry, but I got really excited about that part with Kagome and Sesshomaru...when they were under that influence...awesome, non-the-less. Keep up da good job!

Honestly I cannot tell if you are pro S/K...Are you?? or are you S/R? I wonder...I do hope you are S/K. And I personally would rather just kill Inuyasha off then keep him around, then again, I'm not much of Inuyasha's personal fan...it comes with the terittory(s/p?) of being Sesshomaru-sama's daughter. I finally got my own castle! YAY! I noticed that Kags never uses the 'birth control'...I totally agree with all of your rules! They rock! I wish that the demons hadn't been killed. Least of all that way. I like to call that the 'Demonic Demise'. And if so, why didn't Kagome just bring the demons to the future with her? They wouldn't have been killed at least! Of course they would have to go back to the Sengoku Jidai, but they could kill the mikos, that would make it so much easier. Much Easier. Anyways, that's not how it went, but it was a VERY good story! Great job!
-Keiko, Daughter of Sesshomaru, Heir to the Western Lands.

Reading this story made me have a really awesome Sesshy dream..woohoo...but the sadness of Inu makes me feel horrible! I really like Sesshy/Kag, but did u have to make Inu so sad! You did a wonderful job on this fanfic btw..