please update. love it.

love your story
hey i am red lighting from
and i have stars wars story idea and i'm looking for a writer
here the idea
padme and Anakin have met 10 years ago like in the movie but have not seen each other since
anakin is a jedi and padme a sentor but jedi are allowed to have families padme has one year daughter almost two just a daughter and the father is not involed anakin is single

here a good idea of heow they first meet padme daughter gwts lost at a party and who finds her and mother so they run into

let me know what you think
red lighting

Dude, you need to really, continue this story. It's just gettin better, and to the intense parts. Why stop?

I mean, I want more. As once Anakin said. So, please update this story, IT'S AWESOME.

You must continue!

Cheesy.

Aw, I feel even more bad for Cassidy... But, what's gonna happen with her?You know, is she just gonna stay on Coruscant? update soon!

amazing story..simply amazing. I can't wait for more! Your rock!

A cute little chapter.

Nelarun of Australia

poor poor girl...OBIWAN WHY MUST YOU ALWAYS INTRUDE?!?! lol

Awesome Job so far!

I was beginning to wonder what Cassidy would do while Anakin was gone... looks as if she misses him terribly! Do you think she might plan an escape to meet him out there? Just to be near him? I fear that things may go rather bad if she tries.

Love the update!

poor kids. (Anakin and Cassidy that is) Obi-wan wouldn't even let them finish a conversation before he split them up. Mentors, I tell ya.

Anyways, great story. Please update soon.

Nelarun of Australia

just wanted to add this story to my alert stuffs...

usually i dont like star wars stories that have characters that aren't in the movies (or at least ones that would never be in the movies) but i like this one. update soon!!

Oh my gosh, this is getting better and better, Alley! I'm almost certain Cassidy will now do something very rash and very much like Anakin at that age. Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter!