Lol. i like the end.

mwahahaha!! great story, funny ending. lily is so ruthless it's halarious! boo james!!

aw!! i feel so sorry for snape!! he dosen't deserve that! I like how lily's heart is going out to him. i don't think you should have done f- you should have spelled it out. but, of course, there are people in this world who object to that kind of language, not that i care. good so far.

no!! i hate james! he is so mean!! snape is awsome, so much more caring and considerate. good work once again.

aha! very good. I was wondering what would happen if Lily picked up the diary, it would all back fire! Keep it up!

I loved this story! This is definitely one of my ultimate favorites! It was so funny, so deep, and true to character...

lol
halarious! keep up the good work!

lmao. Everytime I read this story, I crack up...I can guarantee you that. I love it, and yet I've never left you a review...anyway, you got one now. As I said, I laugh so hard when I come to re-read this...so well done, well done. ^_^

Gah, I miss kissing!
Interesting story. I liked the weird partial splinching thing... My mum's from Clitheroe area so in some of your other stories it's strange 'cos it almost sounds like people from my mum's family.
Snarky is a good word.
Uh. Random. Oops. I'll just go learn French for a while :P

Oh! This was absolutely wonderful! I love the way you write Snape, plus you didn't make Lily a damsel-in-distress like so many authors would have. Great job.

Someone somewhere was rec'ing your fics, and I picked this one to start off because I've had a hankering lately for some Lily/Snape. This fit the bill just right. You did a great job building their relationship in a short time. This piece is full of delightful ideas and wording :)

I adore this story. If anything makes melike Lily/Snape it's your version of the pairing. Absolutely wonderful. Will you write more?

This was brilliant!
I loved the ending!!
Wonderful, just wonderful!!

Another great story! I love Lily as an evil succubus- lol! I expect when Snape decides you are manipulative and sneaky you'd have to take it as a compliment. Great plot weaved very nicely into canon.

That showed James...awesome work. Keep it up. I really hope you continue this!