Well, we all know that James convinced Lily to marry him anyway; one hopes he really reformed and didn't just fake her out. It is good to see that Lily isn't like the Marauders, though. One hope she isn't as spineless as Remus when it comes to Snape-bashing!

Kewl..I really like it! Awsome...If ya get sme time please r&R my new story glory in your shadow

Saint or not, she certainly is arrogant! I find I don't really sympathize with little miss perfect. Still, I suppose she means well in her self-satisfied superior sort of way. Of course at her age can she be anything else but smugly self-confident? Interstingly complex personalities.

Can I opt for neither? :-)

Anyways, I don't think I have read anything you have written that I haven't liked, and this is no exception.

Ouch. As I have just gotten through a few weeks of back pain and physical therapy, this chapter made me wince big time.

LOL. Very interesting. cant wait till chapter 4

I love your writing,it's amazing!. So you must write more! And soon! HURRY!

She's going for help at night - on a full moon - when she knows at least one werewolf will be roaming! Oh, very smart.

And even if she thinks the boys would stop Remus from attacking her, has she thought about whether Snape will be so safe/off-limits as she leaves him helpless and incapacitated in an unlocked indefensible hut?

(BTW, the back pain sounds very authentic. I can guess when you composed it in your head.)

Oh, very nice. I like your word choice. update soon!

Excellent chapter. Yep, your alternate examples are infinitely worse. :D (Poor Severus Snape needs a good chiroprator!)

And she won't get suspicious about the fact he has no wand with him? I thought she was supposed to be smart.

I love this one of course, but where's poor little Sevvie? Don't make Lily beat him up!

I didn't expect Lily would land wherever without Snape. I'm interested to find out where he landed and what he did after. Lily's awakening was very well written. I liked the 'undulation' of all the 'un' words. Hahaha!

Great chapter 2 title, LOL. But if the spell is not supposed to be used on people then is it really the lady who vanishes?

I'm looking forward to Lily's revenge.

flawless and perfect as usual:) I love TRICK OR TREAT by the way. Amnd please post new chapters on thios one quickly!