I really like your story, it was very sweet, especially the third chapter

I loved this fic! It was wonderful. The way Xellos and Lina interacted, and even Amelia's stupid song made this sweet, touching, and hilarious. Please write more!

Wow! That was such a good story! The part with Little Xel and Milgasia almost made me cry. You did a wonderful job. I enjoyed the entire thing very much.

Do you think you could write a companion piece to this? Like say Lina and Xelloss afterwards and maybe include a few demon battles in it.. Also I love your fic with Milgazia/Lina but you haven't updated in over a year.

(quivering with laughter) Amelia... the fear of all Mazoku.

Very well written fic _ Gokurousama deshita! Very nicely done

I love how this story comes together! You seem to be able to write Xellos really well and you make it all the sweeter by putting in my favorite chaos poster child. Great story and plz write more X/L fics!

I thought it was going to be a sad ending but I guess I was wrong _ This was a GREAT STORY. I LOVE The part When Lina out smarted Xellos it was funny. Write more X/L Stories because there are barly any left anymore.

Lina-chan .

wow... I don't know what to say. this is very well writen! I love it! I would love to hear the song as well! Awsome!

Nazo

That was so Kawaii! _

Please write more L/X fics...

There my fav.

The ending was great! I can't honestly tell if any characters were mangled in the making of this songfic, but it was a great story, no matter what. I'd pay to read about Luna's expression when Lina takes Xellos home to tell the family.

Loved the ending. _ Good trilogy

*squeals* This is the best chapter ever! I loooooooove your descriptions of how Xelloss could have controlled Lina. I love it! *runs off to read the story all over again*

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I'm speechless...

That is _so_ not like Lina-san. O yea, this is NOT a flame. ;)

Whoa... That is _so_ like Xelloss, tricking our crimson eyed tomboy like that...