great story but sucky ending they didint even kiss dude that was kinda gay the action was great thogh

OMG!!WHY DIDINT YOU RIGHT THAT HE KISSES HER!?I WOULD LIKRD THE ENDING A HELL OF A LOT BETER!

so basicly,this story is about the ''prince'' saving the ''princesess''.thats still kinnda gay.

...um...cool chapter??

this chapter is acshly,not that gay.maby,i just was a little mean before.i am sorry.im realy just a ** naturely.

yeah,...this story is realy ** stupid.im not sure whats gayer,this story or my brother[my brother is acshully gay].

again,why in the hell is this story so danm gay?winrys a princesess??this story dosint make any ** sice at all!

this is the gayist story ive ever read!!im only 10 and i could right a better story than this LAME PEACE OF **!

...um...eds not a human?how did he even become a vampier anyways??and why dose he say winrys full name insted of just winry??arent ed and winry supposed to be childhood friends?god this story is frickin cofusing!

ive never read any of your storys so this chapter seems kindda ** up to me.i dont understand it.

Ah, no!! T^T Sequal pweaase!? I loved it!! -huggles you- Thank you for writing a vampire fic.!! Your one of my many heros!

I LOVED all of it except the ending; I guess I'm just a sucker for sappy, romantic, happy endings.

PLZ don't tell me this is the end, that you have more chapters. PLZ say you have more chapters You rock! so don't stop now

What! how can it be over!? Make a sequel

wha? it's over?