 JaneRain 2005-07-16 . chapter 1I read Interlude 1 when it was first posted and I don't remember if I reviewed or not so I'll go back and do that. This one was well done, excellently written. Everyone was in character and descriptions were detailed without being graphic. Every emotion was well suited to the moment and character. I loved the part between Jack and Sam in his office. Jack was so cute. So, back to 1 and on to 3! |