ok, now although it was a very very very little bit funny you had so many spelling errors and the gramar was so bad that I could not enjoy the story as I think you wanted your readersto enjoy it. The Nsync stuff was funny but was killed by the fact that the story did not flow and had so many errors. You have alot of potetial if only you send your stories through a beta first. Also I know that this story is pretty old and you might be writing thousands of time s better now but advice neverhurt anyone.

WTF? Oh, hell, who cares if it makes absolutely no sense. I loved this story! Though it's kinda scary that NSYNC arrested Foxie.

And I totally agree with you. Doggett and Reyes and all others suck. And Chris Carter should have never let Skinner shoot Krycek. If Rat Boy had to die, he should have given the privilege to either Mulder or Scully.

guam has princesses? i lived there for 7 yrs and alls i know is we have a governor (not a very good one, tho)

interesting fic

There are a lot of spelling errors, but the storyline is funny. (I hope you intended it to be a humor story.) Even though I don't care for N*Sync, they played an excelent cameo. I especially like how you made Guam the setting, very beautiful island Guam is. I wouldn't mind visiting there one day!

::gigglesnort:: That was hilarious in a weird grammarically incorrect(I'm guessing grammarically incorrect on purpose) way.