the last line is so...imploding (for lack of a better term). characterization is well done-such a sad story. I love Vader's thought-process.

*Sobs*

You are really good at writing these emotional things! I have to keep reading your fis!

Alien Roxi

Again, you win! Is it a natural talent of yours to make people cry? Or is it just me that I cry in every emotional story where Obi-Wan dies? This story is just so different than the way it was portrayed in episode IV. Obviously, I like this version much, much better

really good. liked the very end

Aw, I really like this. My stomach twisted at the end.

'I love you, I was waiting for you, I have missed you for so long, and now all you can do is leave me again…' that just brings back everything that was Anakin.

I love this!

Its so beautiful, I dont have words. Congratulations

Wow...just wow. Good.

An unexpected point of view... But a beautiful one.

::sniff:: Oh, that was such a different view on that infamous scene...I love it! I just...want to hug Anakin all the more now. :)

Wow. Loved it.