God, that was funny :) Great job !

I always think about writing scene fillers like these, but never get around to them. This was so cute, I loved it. It made me laugh, too. It's interesting reading about them at such a young age. You did a GREAT job. I'd like to see more of these from you!

Mel

haha that was a nice read!

LOL that was funny. Poor Monica.

I liked the little fight she had with Ross. I love Ross and his keyboard. :)

Oh, that was funny! I liked that! :-)

Steph

I liked it. Good job.

There's a bit of inconsistency here: you say in the intro. that Monica and Rachel are ten, then speak of teenagers at the party and Monica is thinking of high school as if it was not far away. Teenagers would make a more appropriate audience for Jack Geller's story.

That said, this was funny, and I liked the Rachel-Monica interaction.