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| helenluvsboo 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! *glomps* |
| Kitten-the-Wolf 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseThat is so sweet! ^^ |
| FlyingTackle 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseer, sorry, I think I may have taken the ending too literally? they continue living and stuff, right? you kinda made it sound like they just combined into one person and...i don't know, nothing happened after that? but that can't be right...please clarify. btw it was good, I liked it. |
| EdwardCullenlover13 2007-06-29 ch 1, | abuseoh wow i loved it |
| Raine44354 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abusei likd it alot. ( )_( ) (='.'=) (")_(") This is Bunny. Copy and paste Bunny into your profile to help him gain world domination. SUPPORT THE BUNNY! |
| Trillian 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseM! Happy shivers! |
| iloveanimecartoons 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abusewow! um...INTENSITY! |
| Earthen Byakko 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, but surroundings and explanations would've been nice. Then again... uh, never mind. If you listen to me, you might mess it up. ^~; Don't listen to that, either; everyone says I'm a good writer. Just... uh... ok, completely disregard this review; I'm my own worst judge. ^~ |
| anonomous 2005-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseyour story is so juicy! luv it |
| kagomereincarnated 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely lovely. :) short, sweet, and beautiful. great job. |
| melodie 2005-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseso cute.. |
| lovelykagome 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abusei like it. u should make it longer. |
| elena 2005-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse*clap clap* very much so! |
| Jessica Page 2005-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was great i hope u write more soon |
| Mya Lariue 2005-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abusedude er or dudette youre like wicked deep lol keep writing |