 snowy 2005-12-16 . chapter 1 aww...kawaii! |
 B.D. Gerretson 2005-08-24 . chapter 1(bows low) I may say truthfully that though I have read many stories on fanfiction and fictionpress (a site for original works) I have rarely come across so talented a writer. You write with emotion and depth without talking the point to death. I truly admire your style of writing and love what works you have done. I will read what you write based on your name because I know you will not disappoint. (bow) |
 ErrorDexis 2005-08-05 . chapter 1Very deep. I'd offer some revisions but it's already posted. It's cool though, I like the descriptions, you've definately put more work into this one than your other ones. Keep it up kid. |
 silverymare 2005-06-26 . chapter 1Wow..
I loved this gorgeous story. I don't usually read Sesshoumaru stories, but this pulled me away from by reading and chucked me alongside Sesshoumaru's quest. The description is fabulous and the idea is perfect for the dog lord. I love this classy piece. :) Keep writing this well, and I'm sure we'll hear tons and tons of great things about you! Oh but 1 thing, resume.. did u mean like a job resume? Because I doubt the Lord of the West would know anything about job resumes..
Love the one-shot. (thumbs up) |
 Never Surrender 2005-06-20 . chapter 1...deep... |
 PurpleAfternoon 2005-06-19 . chapter 1You have an amazing writing style. Since the first time I read your first fanfiction I always thought it was really good. You just have a way with painting words. Don't stop! |
 DmonXtrmN8r 2005-06-19 . chapter 1dude...this is a awasome story! i loved it! all your story's are wonderful...wish I could write with as much depth as you, you make it so easy to understand. I wouldnt be surprised if you became a famous author.
well keep up the good work! |
 Dark Inu Fan 2005-06-17 . chapter 1nice. I really liked this story and how complex it could be in your simplisity(can't spell!). not many stories are out there (if any) that deal with sesshoumaru's emotion. keep up the good work, dark |
 sue sue magoo 2005-06-17 . chapter 1PEDIPHILE!
I'm bored. Get back to your damn computer and talk to me.
I stole a sheep today. |
 neverhere1997 2005-06-17 . chapter 1wow, that was a breath-taking story. so many emotions! I loved it! the topic was one i've never seen before, so I was quite interested. this was amazing Sky! i hope you can do more soon! |
 Oni Rinku 2005-06-17 . chapter 1I like it! Thank you for writing it. |
 Lucinda the Maid 2005-06-17 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this. The title grabbed me right away, and, once you stated that the fic would be about Sessho-maru, I nodded and thought, "Yeah, I could definetely see how his life is one big journey." The story flowed well, though slowly at times, and its theme and purpose were made clear. Your vocabulary is very nice and appropriate for a fic such as this; I love your use of adjectives. My favorite parts, though, had to be lines that contradicted each other, like, "He refused to believe that it was that simple. That it was that complex." And that last line... simply wonderful. You really clued us readers into the enigma that is Sessho-maru.
Hope you don't mind some CC, though. There were a few spelling errors, like "confidant and unafraid" (could you have meant "confident"?), indicating that you may want to go over this with a fine-toothed comb. And, as stated, the story was rather slow-moving. But, once you got to the halfway point, it sped up again, so it's alright. All in all, nice. Good going! |
 littleolmee 2005-06-16 . chapter 1another story? wonderful, you did such a great job on your last one, i will stay tuned to see where you take us this time! littleolmee |
 Drake Clawfang 2005-06-16 . chapter 1cool. I love those stories that make you think. |