You know, I had forgotten about this story and had to re-read it from the beginning - which wasn't a hardship believe me !! I think this has to be one of my fave's of yours. I love the way you write Jon/Jay - you've made him into his own person which few authors have been able to do. They just write him as a carbon-copy of Jarod - and he's not. I also love the interaction between the characters - you understand them so well and your dialogue is spot on. I personally can't wait for Miss P to knock some sense into Jon - he needs it !!

I hope you're able to update soon...

Hi imag1ne,

Always happy to see an update on one of yours story, no matter how long the wait.
Great chapter as always. Loved the conversation between Jon and and Jarod. Poor Jarod he feels so guilty for not being able to reach his younger self, but with Miss Parker's help hopefully they will discover his secret and reason for returning to the Cente. Hope that Jarod will find Abby before Lyle does. Amazing story and I can't wait to read more. Also hope to see another chapter from Survival II.
Mercy

oh! this is picking up so wonderfully. And I would be most pleased if you cameout with Jarod and Parker being Jon's biological paretns and thus willing to go toe to toe with the Center to save their grandchild that Abby is carrying.

I got it, I think!!

So glad you've decided to continue with this story,i love reading your work,great chapter as always hope to be reading more of this story soon. julie

I’ll try not to wait a year before posting another chapter ;-P

For those who are following your story, I am glad you are going to continue. I only scanned it. No Sydney in chapter 1,2,& 3, Twice in Chaptee 4, Once in Chapter 5, No SYDNEY in chapter 6, little to keep my interest
Will wait for it to be finished before I truely read it.
As I oly have a handfull of writers that I will wait on.
Have started too many of stories on this site to have writer loss interest and leave me saying hey what happened.
Nans

This a great story! I've read a lot of your other stories, but I hadn't come across this one. I'm glad you're continuing it. Very, very interesting! More soon! (Waiting for another chapter of Guilty though!)

i can't believe you updated this! that's fantastic! i loved this story and was so sad when you left it. great chapter - throwing another wrinkle into the story is always a plus. i sincerely hope you update again!

Jon needs to learn to trust...liked the dialogue between Jarod and Jon and he needs to learn not to underestimate MP. Well done.

This is a really interesting story! It's fresh and unique, and very well-written. I sincerely hope you are planning to continue it!

Hi Imag1ne,

Loved this chapter. Hope that Miss Parker can figure out Jon's plan before Jarod leaves. Great interaction between J. and MP. Great story.
Please update soon.

Mercy

Last chapter was very, very good. Liked the discussion shared between Miss Parker and Jon. It came off very realistic, which I liked. Looking forward to the next chapter.

So I guess Jarod has trouble simming himself, huh?

Wow, this is another great chapter! Keep doing you fantastic work and post us next chapter soon as you can, please.

Remember, you are a fabulous writer and continue your wonderful stories( Survival II,Guilty and this one).

Ah, people who are stubborn make things exponentially harder for themselves, don't they?!

I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for updating. I was wondering what happened to the story. Anyway, keep up the great work and don't take too long to post the next chapter. Peace!