Cool chapter. Sorry, couldn't help myself.

Poor Tristan. Too bad he doesn't feel more loved.

I would enjoy learning a bit more about what goes on at Tristan's school. (Must be a Harry Potter thing.)

Please update soon.

Barb

Aw! That's so sad.

c'mon update!

coolness!

I like this, although it seems that CHristine and Erik are kinda unreasonable. You would think that they'd be nicer to their son...and if he's not a naturally gifted musician, that they would be satisfied with their daughter and let him do what he wants. I still love your stories, though, so update soon!

I've been enjoying your story. :) Hopefully, now that he's away from his father, Tristan will start to flourish even moreso musically.

It will be interesting to see how these two boys get along, and (of course) how much Erik will figure in the succeeding chapters.

Here's a correction for you: it should be *tow*headed, not *toe*headed.

I look forward to your future chapters!

Barb

This is a sweet story; I definitely understand Tristan's point of view, having had a similar childhood. I will have to look at your other works; you've created two OC's with distinct personalities and I think you got Christine's and Erik's characters as well. Good job!

etherealfire

Right more! I like it. its not like most stories, how they are full of hugs and kisses, it's more like a realistic life than a phantasy.

i thought hed hang Tristan or something for getting something wrong.

cool, i like how Erik gets to have the normal kind of life he always wanted. yay! please update soon!