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| Emily 2008-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was so beautiful... I cried a little. In a good way. Fantastic work. |
| Dark Angel's Blue Fire 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseomg that was amazing welldone! |
| autumnlover 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abusea... a bi round of applause for naother great story by you! |
| njty9101 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThat. Was. Incredible. I could actually picture Ron sitting at Hermione's grave digging in the mud. And not talking and blaming himself is something Ron would do. It was really sad, and that was a horrible choice Ron had to make. I can understand how hard it would've been. Amazing job. |
| Uzamaki-Girl 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was hauntingly beautiful. No other words can explain it. |
| scowlingpixie 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseEmotional, inspiring, well written, amazing. I loved it. So sad, but such a good story. And you could easily imagine it being true... sad as that sounds. I wouldn't change a thing. It was perfect. |
| Sinokrates 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThis fic of yours is one of my personal favorite. Sin |
| starynite816 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseOmg, the "I would have saved you too" bit got me. I was doing okay, keeping myself together, I wouldn't cry but then I read that line and I lost it. This is a truly toughing story and it was wonderfully written. I'm gonna go grab a box of tissues now. |
| Fidelian 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, you made me cry. I *never* cry and you made me do it. Really really good, I loved it. I'll go cry some more now. |
| Ashily 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was really, really good! I loved it! WOW! WOW! I'm using that word a lot, aren't? I loved that little part, with the words, liar, bretrayer, murderer, or what they were. I can't remember. I'm too lazy too look. Perfect opening too. Very lovely work. |
| I Write Tragedies 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI was a bit disappointed in it because I felt that the story could've been told better. I thought that it was too short and a bit on the slow side. However, I did like that it was really Ron who was haunting himself, not Hermione. That was quite clever. |
| Jollie Killjoy 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseLate review, but hey, I found this in someone's favorite and it caught my interest. Very well written! I absolutely LOVE the vocabulary you used here, which improved the story rather than weighed it down (extensive vocabulary has a tendency to do that, non?). Everything was in character, and you really did a great job on the whole gloomy aspect of the story, as well as the 'warmer' bits. Keep it up! |
| HAPPILI INSANE 2005-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH .MY. GOD I WAS WEEPING YOU ARE A TRUE GENIAS THAT HAS TO BE THE MOST TUCHING THING I HAVE EVER READ AND IT WAS WANDERFULLY WRITEN I LOVED IT. DEFENTLY A TEAR JURKER |
| unlikely2 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseYou certainly have a grasp of endings. At the conclusion of the first section (which made me cry) it is a relief to see Hermione. The next section turns this conclusion neatly on it's head but, after all, it was Ron that Harry rescued in the Triwizard Tounament making the account ring true. And then: 'He took one last look at the face that had haunted him, at the dead eyes and the unspeaking lips of someone he had never known, and he let go. Very neatly achieved. Congratulations on a superb piece of writing. |
| Katie26 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abuseWhoah, that definitely made me cry. I want to give both Harry and Ron a hug, but in this situation, there's not much that can make it better. Harry's right, no one should ever be faced with a decision like that. |