I really hope you finish this story. I couldn't stop reading it. Theres so many emotions in there its like your constantly on edge.

Please return to this story soon. You've done a good job in setting the scene and I definitely want to find out where this is heading.

So...it's been about four months since the last update. I'm wondering if you're going to continue this, or if I should just take it off my story-alert list?

-sil

Please Please Please updated this soon, I can't wait to find out what happens nexts.

This story is Fantastic!

Still loving it...and hoping you're on quarters at school, like me, which would mean you're out on winter break soon, and can post again! I've been hanging here for two months, man! ;)

-sil

You don't suck at action at all - at least not in my opinion!

Great chapter!

Hope you get the chance to update this soon!

Cheers :)

Good chap!

I have been playing catch up with this story, but i love it! I've only recently got back into stargate stories.

It's absolutely fantastic and the brief action at the end is pretty exciting stuff. WRITE MORE.

great stuff with the action, it's good. hope something too fatal doesn't happen next.

update soon!

I'm loving the whole thing! Can't wait to read more, when you get the time (as a fellow full-time college student...paid for by my two full-time jobs...I completely understand about not having any free time!).

One thing, though...a little typo I think? It's 911, not 991. In the US, anyway. Dunno about anywhere else.

-sil

One of the best stories I've come across in a while - I love the essence of the S/J stuff and can't wait to see what happens next. You're doing a really good job. Just watch for the odd typo before you post, it's one of the only detractors to what is otherwise fun, heart-felt work IMO. WRITE MORE!

Great chapter! You so don't suck at action! I thought it was great! I personally struggle with writing action... just find it harder than other stuff for some reason, but I think you did a good job. Exciting stuff! Hope everyone's going to be okay! And I can sympathize with having trouble finding time/energy to write while at uni. But I hope you'll be able to update before too long because I love this story so much! =)
Hugs,
Gwil

would you like a beta reader? i'm offering my services...lol :) keep writing, it's good!

I absolutely love this story, desperately want them to kiss, please update soon.

hey, this is great! My only dissapointment is the fact that there wasnt any kissing, but all the tingly feelings i felt when then should was just as good. great work, keep it up! And I agree with sam, 'Nice **' indeed!