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Inchoate Designs
2009-07-01 . chapter 18
I just realized, I haven't reviewed this chapter yet. I read it quite a while ago, fairly late at night, and decided that I'd review the next day, but starting the next day, I lost use of the Internet for over a month. So the review never got written.

Anyway, the chapter was great, like all of the others. I don't know what else to say, but the story deserves another review. I really like this story and just hope that you write the next chapter soon. I also really hope that you're not losing inspiration for the story or anything. It's all the way down at number 6 in the order of stories last updated on your profile. I'm just hoping you don't discontinue this story (as I see you're really moving into the Naruto fandom), because that would be such a shame. I would be really disappointed. There aren't very many good Beyblade stories out there, especially featuring the Blitzkrieg Boys. Anyway, I can only hope that you write the next chapter soon and continue the story.
southern-weather
2009-04-06 . chapter 18
absolutely love this story. I didn't get bored once while reading it! You keep them so well in character. I really hope you update soon :]
squib
2008-12-15 . chapter 18
PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON
Anime Onnanoko
2008-12-13 . chapter 18
really good chapter, plz plz update soon
bladz-liska
2008-12-12 . chapter 18
My deepest apologies! I’m not completely sure why I forgot about it, but my review.
Wow… things are now coming! I’m so happy that is not just plans and strategies, like you promised everything is ready.
Boris and his new lackeys… I remembered something like Bourne trilogy, people contacting people, spying, complotting; everyone taking place. And was really funny (also realistic) reading Boris contacting Tolya and company for the next part on his plan no doubt you’re doing a fantastic work developing Boris’ personality so… manipulative and intelligent.
The second block, and my favorite I can’t remember other fic where the Russian team would disagree openly about having Kai on the team. Everyone write about sad friendship stories and happiness together… and interesting thing, really you’re working here. Tala is the only semi-ally Kai has on the team, and really Ian and Spencer dislike him openly but they know he is actually necessary. I really enjoyed reading Brian and Kai confrontation, sometimes things like this are completely necessary in order to take other step on the road, and not to be the happy-happy-united Russian team, just like a truce, no? they won’t kill him between them during the championship for the victory’s sake.
Sorry again, I hope you update before New Year, if you can’t well. Happy Holidays.
See ya!
IceWolf15
2008-11-26 . chapter 18
I'm so glad you've updated!! I missed the last chapter because I had to study so as to not fail my exams.
I liked this chapter, and I didn't think it was too long.It was all well written, that didn't make it tedious either.
Update soon!!
QDA
thegreatwhitewolf
2008-11-21 . chapter 18
I'm sorry my review is late. I'm behind in everything. -_-
Ooh things are getting interesting. Boris is really evil! Ugh, I can hear the poeple above me. NOT fun! Ah well. I can't wait to read more. Dear god, I think the people above me are doing IT. Dang. Not really what I want to hear. -_-
blitzkrieg soldier87
2008-11-21 . chapter 18
Okay... so first thing is first, I love the plot and how you execute it, it's detailed very well and isn't too over on the details. Next thing is that I'm lusting for your next update, this is so intruiging and interesting that when I finished this chapter, you left me hanging, BADLY. :| =)) Update soon,and I'll rest in peace :))
Sciura
2008-11-19 . chapter 18
Finally! Very good, convincing break-outs are nice (if very long and complicated) and the Bryan-scene was good. Steady,very slow, but worth the wait.
HimekoSukie
2008-11-17 . chapter 18
I have to admit I love Boris' character in this story! He's such a perfect villain! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hope it has more action with the blitzkrieg boys ^^
Crimson Breeze
2008-11-17 . chapter 18
I don't think your going to slow at all i really like the way you describe how everything happens, it makes the story a lot more interesting. I really enjoyed the blitzkrieg boys' part. Can't wait to read more

Ja Ne,
~Crimson Breeze
Lithium89
2008-11-17 . chapter 18
This chapter had me on the edge of my seat! Angel, you're a genius. Keep up the good work!

**Lithium89
FlamingIce94
2008-11-17 . chapter 18
Loved the faceoff between the Blitzkrieg Boys! It was so exciting! I like how you introduce your characters and give some background on them before having them become part of the plot. I cannot wait to see how things work out come the time for the tournament, and Kai better watch out.
Good Chapter!
-FlamingIce
phoenix-falling
2008-11-17 . chapter 18
As much as I can't wait for you to get to all the action and fun stuff, I actually really love all the suspense and I think the pace is great. I wish I had as much patience as you did D:

You know what? I LOVE YOU!
Why?
TO be honest, I've never been a big fan of that "Kai and the blitzkreig boys were best friends in the Abbey" storyline (if that makes any sense) so it's nice to finally find a story where they dislike Kai. This sotry is pretty much to all of my likings. Seriously, I don'y think I could give you any constructive criticism, I like everything about it :)

Anyway, you MUST update sooner, this story is far to good to be uploaded once every... now and then (i can't remember the last itme you updated D: ** memory) get writing!
jellybean-kitty
2008-11-17 . chapter 18
Great chapter! Hope you update soon!
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