"For stars do not fall silently into oblivion / But blaze for eternity..."
Ah yes, there's the adoration, the loyalty, the love. My dear Ethreal Fire ('lo, Folk!), your gift for wordsmithing is beyond beautiful. This is the third poem in a month to make me tremble. You already know the other two. ;)
Well done yet again! Your poetry is clearly as musical and passionate as your novels.

This is positively lovely!

*ahem* *removes crick from neck* *streches* *gargles mouthwash* *generally gets ready for speach*


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WOW.



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"For stars do not fall silently into oblivion/But blaze for eternity." Beautiful wording, and overall a lovely piece.

that... that was beautiful... one of the best pieces of poetry i've ever read... it fit sirius perfectly... he was my favourite character... you're right... he is not dead... he is like a star... the dog star... and the Marauder shall never fall... never... "And your star will shine in the darkest night"... "But blaze for eternity"... "The night sky and the stars"... "Starry night"... i loved it... it was... magical...

wow...i almost cried :*( heheheh :) dont stop writing,this was excellent :)

Hm, smart using Sirius as the reference to the Dog Star. Ah, but of course, any Astronomy-lover would know about that? Heh, I love astronomy too! I've wanted (since 4th grade at least) to be an Astronomer. My sister thinks I'm an idiot but forget her. Anyways, I just really liked the star reference! I'm only going to review your Harry Potter stories, but that's alright, isn't it? ~Darkwing731

Beautiful! Please, don't EVER stop writing! I love your work!

I really love this.