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MysteryLady-Tx
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
NICE! I like it

THANKS:"D
blah0ily.
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
Kyubbi-bound in an idiot ball of sunshine!!
LOL! love'd it again.
just like pretty much all the naruto fanfics you've written.
>_<
fav'd
NoNAMEohmygod
2008-11-02 . chapter 1
Neat story! I like how it was written. A lot of other fics seem all jumbled together, if you understand what I'm saying. Sorry, I'm a little confusing.
Great work though!
karierte
2008-05-28 . chapter 1
I love you.

Seriously, I do.

If I could, I would jump across the many timezones that probably separate us and squeeze you to death.

Wonderful, and you hold a power in your writings, a power that we all know you possess.
midnightwaters
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
Damn right he should worry.
Wasabi-Cheddar
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Sweet & melancholy. Truthful. It makes you think.
Good Work!
Illucida
2006-06-18 . chapter 1
:) I think I'm in love with you. [love as in adoration at your skills]
Bringer of the Storm
2006-05-23 . chapter 1
"Who would’ve thought that the Kyuubi, a murderous, marauding beast, would be bound inside such an idiot ball of sunshine?"

Wahaha. That's one of the best descriptions of Naruto I've ever seen.

This is a really well-done fic about Team 7, especially since it's from Kakashi's point of view. I especially liked the way you tied in Sakura, since many people tend to write her off as useless. It's true, though, that she holds the red threads (I liked the inclusion of that, as well.)

I honestly don't have much concrit beyond repeating what someone already said--some of the lines feel a bit choppy. Otherwise, it's very good.
Blonde-Existentialist
2006-03-06 . chapter 1
Especially fond of the blunt, cool overall manner of this fic. It screams denial, yet is brutally honest as well.
XxLilyNGxX
2006-03-05 . chapter 1
this is amazing. There are a lot of team 7 fics out there but this is ne of the better ones.
muchimotsu
2006-02-16 . chapter 1
You were right. This is funny, but not funny. You should've put a bit more Sakura in there, though. But what do I care? It was still great.
Magical Poof
2005-12-31 . chapter 1
I loved this line:

"Jiraiya carting Naruto around like a pet, then teaching him something as powerful as Rasengen. Sasuke with his head bowed, the seal standing out in stark relief against his paper pale skin.

Two out of three. How long will Sakura have to wait for her member of the legendary Sannin?"

I really liked this, too. You're an amazing author, you know that?
wellduh...
2005-12-27 . chapter 1
"All three of them have very individualized problems: Sakura is weak. Naruto is stupid. Sasuke is a tool.
They have very individualized goals: Sakura wants Sasuke, Naruto wants friends and respect, and Sasuke wants to kill people. To kill very specific people. Fortunately, for shinobi, these are all more or less acceptable goals."

Best sentence ever.
Great work.
Azamiko
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
Hm...I rather like that...
FluffyKakashi
2005-10-28 . chapter 1
I liked it. the beginning made me laugh. " Sakura is weak. Naruto is stupid. Sasuke is a tool." "Sakura wants Sasuke, Naruto wants friends and respect, and Sasuke wants to kill people. To kill very specific people." were the most funny parts and one other i dont feel like finding right now. (i'm trying to get my sister up to take a shower...) no pairing fics have been starting to bore me for awhile but this one was good. nice job on Kakashi's voice. it sounded a good bit like him...at least i think so. everyone has layers...ya know? like an onion...the onion of life...the onion of Kakashi or Sasuke or Naruto...eh i'm not a big fan of Sakura and she doesn't have the quality of the other onions. hehehe...no i'm not hungry, i just have issues. besides...i dont really like onions. oh but of course, great job! (took awhile to get to the point, ne?)
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