Ah... my heart aches a little bit after reading this. It was so good, and descriptive, and wonderful! And emotional! It was just so, so good... this is going into my faves!

This is an angsty story but some parts are overly dramatic. It was the wonderful imagery that saved it from being just another one of those overdone Kakashi fics.

I normally hate fics that go the Sakura=Rin/Kakashi=Sasuke route, but you do it with such grace it works perfectly.

I love the use of children's games in this.

They're so pretty-- I never quite know what to say. Deep and meaningful, though, and great job!

Sarah: ... that was ... interesting. very intersting.

Poetically dark. I liked it very much, I did, I did.

i have no idea why you didin't like this story, i loved it. it is very original, i like how you depicted kakashi's links to his past, not as a form of memory but an actual interaction. keep up the good work.

that's so awesome...you have to be one of the best writers on fanfiction! The ending's so sweet.

Great story. I love it, especially the faults in their relationship and the last part.

That was beautiful, but I think you know that already. Really really beautiful, I think I've never had the oportunity to read about a so believable Kakashi before. He is simply perfect.

I wish you could write more ;). Thank you!

I don't usually read dark fics, but I must say that I really liked this one. I like the main idea of it: history repeats itself not as punishment, but for second chances.

I've read this story three times, maybe four, and every time, it just sends goosebumps over my skin, it's so good.
(or, I have my airconditioning on too high, but I don't think so)
Wonderful.

Beautifully worded and well put. I love the angst- how you've molded it because it makes the reader think and how it's not overdone.

Ah, that was absolutely /brilliant/. I would try to come up with something like constructive criticism, but I can't find any flaws with this piece.

Your writing is wonderful; it has that raw kind of feeling that expresses so much emotion.

"Her secret is that sometimes she sees Sasuke in Kakashi’s eyes." Beautiful line there.