That girl is too many kind of ways of CRAZY! Poor Alec...but I hope my girl is getting ready to kick her psycho butt!

I knew it, I knew it. That chick is manticore and now I'm seriously thinking she's also Psy-ops.

I don't like nor trust the red head, Ceila. It was too quick the way she turned down Max, I bet she is manticore and wants Alec.

Stalkers are creepy. especially ones that can make the very air one breathes into date rape drug variety.

So she's a transgenic date rape drug?

great awkward moments! the ending is particularly amusing. good job!

aw thats sweet! But sad!

the ending was very cute btw :)

so very much alec-like to give a hint and you won't know if he's serious or not...

since you're on holidays and won't update soon, i decided to read your old fanfics ;)

my guess is that celia is a psy-ops, like mia. but then it's what i can assume knowing the series. it can also be a totally different secret alec and she share together. anyway, i'm curious about the following chapters :)

btw; good idea to let max worry about alec's 'mental state' and compare him to ben. i'm sure that's the best way to reconstruct and comprehend max's affection to alec in most cases. well at least it's an alternative to the usual heat-caused relationship between the two so many ff's are based on... (not that i didn't like those ones, though ;D)

Aw, thats good! Yet creepy Celia. What a situation. im off to read the sequel, good story!

Hannah

hey.. great story.. i was bored and decided to find something to read and i happened to stumble upon your fic. now i'm off to read the sequel. hope it lives up to my expectation. take care.. later.

Wow, that was great :)

Really gave you a feel of the show, how they always had different transgenics with different "powers" in each episode in S2.

Now it's late, so I'll read the sequel tomorrow :)

Nice ending, well put together.

that was a cracker ending

you're right about the story not being appropriate for "MA ‘like-that’ action" the companionship really worked

as a whole the story was fantastic

The story is great. I'd love to read a sequel.